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Click hereShe was sobbing hard and I laid her on the bed. I got her a blanket and covered her and kissed her.
"I love you mom and it's not your fault." I started moving away but she caught my hand and pulled me towards her.
"Fuck me John while you still have chance."
"Mom I love you and I'll fuck you when you want me to not force you." WIth that I kissed my Mom on head and strolled away.
To be continued...................
One minute he is shoving his hands in her jeans then the next ripping off her skirt. You suck!
Words my mother finally said after3 years of teasing.
This story is so poorly written that I had to stop reading shortly into it. It's not worth getting into specifics. Your English is awful, too.
Nothing is greater than a mother giving herself to her own boy. I will never forget the first time my cock was pumping in and out of my mothers warm cunt hole, she was my first fuck and I loved her.
Before it can be considered good it must have consistency.
I too saw the fatal flaw of going from jeans to a skirt in a matter of two paragraphs.
In one paragraph you wrote, "I took my other hand and shoved it inside her jeans rubbing her clit."
Then in the paragraph following the next one the first sentence you wrote was, "She gasped and I slipped down her skirt and panties."
This all supposed to happen in a matter of real minutes. Even I know that skirts and jeans are an either/or proposition and never ever worn together. This is were I lost interest in your story as I suspect many more did as well. Did you even look for an editor?