- Incest/Taboo
- Spiraling In
- Page 3
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Click hereI hugged him, crushing my tits against his chest as we came down from the high of our climax, catching my breath, knowing that I was his slave forever.
Finally, I stood up, feeling his soft cock slipped out of me, his cum leaking out of my pussy. Joining my mom and sister on the floor, we kneeled forever in servitude to our one and only master.
I lost all sense of time and my surroundings as I spiraled into a sea of pleasure and obedience.
- COMMENTS
mcisover 13 years agoAuthorHi guy30,
You hit it right on the spot. I have a tendency to be repetitive at times, writing too much for minor stuff in the story which my editor had pointed out to me. Trying to improve on it as I write more in the future. Thanks for your feedback.
guy30over 13 years agoWhile the theme of rape makes me physically ill, your writing skills aren't bad. It got a bit repetitive at times though, with the screensaver and the spying, which you might want to consider.
mcisover 13 years agoAuthorHi,
Actually I submitted it under mind control category but it seems like literotica accepted it under the incest category instead. I think it would be better if you know how submission of stories work on literotica as what authors submitted are still liable to be changed by literotica in the end. Personally, I didn't even consider this an incest story until my editor pointed it out to me that it has incest content. lolz
Anonymousover 13 years agothis would be better in the sci-fi/fantasy area that is where hypnosis belongs not incest use your head for a change
DBRS
