- Loving Wives
- Star Quality
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Click hereMy apologies to Dustin Hoffman and Mrs. Robinson. I just couldn't resist the red Alpha Spyder etc.
Hope you enjoyed it.
By the way, whatever you may think, I know for a fact that the pair of them lived happily ever after.
How do I know?
Well they're my characters aren't they?
- COMMENTS
onlythelonelylove4 days agoA pity our hero couldn’t have told the hotel concierge that his wife was so drunk that she couldn’t make a clear decision given her state of inebriation; I.e., too drunk to give consent... And that if they did not want to intervene to stop a rape then he would call the police to report it. It would be easier for all concerned if they took care of this in-house rather than have the police have to do it for them. The negative publicity and eyewitnesses to her bizarre behavior showing her lack of rationality, etc., etc., etc., but yes, you can argue he is a bit drunk but he is not a dummy… in any case, hindsight is 20 - 20… Thank you for the read.
ibuguser5 months agoI like your stories but this one was a flop.
Good writing but the protagonist can't be that stupid and make so many mistakes, can he?
Anonymous5 months agoEh, Greg's a softy. I wouldn't have stood for that nonsense she was putting on at the bar when they first met Daniel. Then the whole Christmas party thing, for sure gone then. There's no way to prove nothing actually happened at the party; only their word against Greg's. However, all the surrounding factors suggest Greg is correct. They had already fooled around, slept together, then she leaves and shacks up with Daniel afterwards? What was that all about, anyway? They had a fight, she left upset, and then they're just separated? He having fallen to an all time low and she climbing the totem pole of wealthy men? Boom, divorce for abandonment. Let's not forget that she's openly cheated on him all those years she was gone. No man with any confidence whatsoever would have allowed things to play out like that i.e let her decide to divorce, show up to her wedding, taken her back. Which brings up the conflicting points of the book. The writer makes him appear as a man with a spine, but then makes him appear as a spineless coward as well. He's either one or the other, OR, he has a mental illness and shouldn't be allowed out of the happy hospital.
