"Are you my mother?"
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Awe man
I was happy reading along and I turned the page of this wonderful story only to see that fantastic punch line.
I was just curious if page 3 was a fluke or you did plan it that way?
Keep going I love this story.more...
Call me clueless
That thought never even entered my head. Almost made me spew my coffee....I say almost, cause nothing makes me waste good coffee. lol
Another good chapter with a mega shock ending
I had thought of that...
Given the circumstances and the age difference, I HAD thought of the fact that she might be his mother. Although the unintentional incest might be a turn on for some readers, if that turns out to be true I will stop reading. That would be a shame since I had really enjoyed this so far.more...
Did NOT see that coming . . .
OK, you've got me hooked.
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