"Are you my mother?"
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"Are you my mother?"
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On my second read through
Love the story, my second time reading through it as I said in the title lol, though one thing always bugged me. I never did like Louis' clingy, selfish attitude throughout the story as it got rather annoying. I mean, he's already getting very, very good treatment by a renowned porn star (paying for school, his grandmother's assisted living AND letting him live in her mansion), and on top of that he doesn't seem to realize he came here for a JOB not to romanticize his relationship with Lonnie. It's understandable to get a crush on her given the circumstances but even so he keeps being all "I only want to have sex with you" blah blah when he knows very well he came down here for a job interview, as a porn star. He's a smart guy "supposedly" so he would know he's not going to get to fuck just her. Just seems silly both times I read the story but I know he's a kid, just a pet peeve on my end, love the story though!more...
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