Star Struck Ch. 04

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Louis could feel a slow build of an impending orgasm. This was not how he wanted it, so he turned her back over to their original position. Sensing that, she said, "You saved yourself for me, now come in me."

"But—"

"I'm protected."

And that was really all he needed to hear to explode. He showered the inside of her pussy with the built up cum from fucking five women. The feel of his powerful ejaculation had Chrissy squirming as his climax erupted. Their voices echoed their passion, their perspiration signaled their intensity and the kiss they shared as they finished was their expression of love.

A moment later, they could hear the muted moaning of the others and they saw the women all furiously rubbing their own clits to bring themselves to their own orgasms from watching the arousing display Louis and Chrissy had provided.

Afterward, they all stared at each other with embarrassed expressions, but just as quickly, they all burst into laughter.

When that died down, Chrissy asked, "So, will you come?"

"I just did," Louis retorted.

"I mean back to California."

He glanced at the four other women. All had a hope-filled expression on their faces. He knew what his answer would be. "It seems that's where my new family is. And that's where I should to be."

The four women pounced on the bed and engaged in a gigantic naked group hug.

THE END

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Excellent story. With the right ending. Of course there is room for more chapters if you feel like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great series! Would be cool to hear about his & Chrissy's ongoing adventures!

linnearlinnearabout 2 years ago

Amazingly good series, I would definitely read more chapters. I like that you wrapped it all up nicely but I wanted more, I figured that Chrissy was Lonnie's it's daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I still say Louis' father knocked Lonnie up and after the baby was born, she left them, went to California, and was a paid movie slut. Louis is her son

TrollTureTrollTureabout 5 years ago
I like!

I really liked this story! I would like to read more stories with some meat on them about porn, not just about guys with big dicks and women with big tits fucking anyone within sight.

A couple of minor points though:

Louis was a bit too ambivalent for a teenager who has just been introduced to sex. And with so much sex all at once, every guy would be overwhelmed! Give him a few weeks or months, then he might get moody.

The writer's naive(?) attitude to STDs!

When Louis first had sex with Lonnie they did it bareback, but she didn't let him come inside her because his cum might be infected? I'm sorry, but just sticking a naked cock in another human being is enough to potentially infect someone. On the same subject, after he had sex with Angela, also bareback, Carly wiped his dick off with a washcloth because "We take cleanliness and disease very seriously in our business." Sorry, that is not nearly enough! They should have him tested before he had any more sex, or at least put a condom on him.

It would have been better if the writer just told us that we were reading about a world without STDs and be done with it and not mention it again. Treating it like this simply suggests ignorance.

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