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Click here"Oh come on, don't you think I deserve a hug?" I said, opening my arms. He didn't hesitate to return it, wrapping his arms around me shoulders in an innocent hug. We broke apart and I felt the warmth of his body leave my skin. "It better not be complete goodbye though. You promised to keep in touch." I said, cracking a half smile.
"One that I intend to keep." He said.
- COMMENTS
TimothyMover 10 years agoat least they both came to the same conclusion, but it's still sucks. Good thing you added that in your comment, as I wasn't quite sure either.
Like most of the other readers this is the chapter I liked the least. Partly because it's upsetting even if the outcome is logical but also because it's such a short chapter. But I can see why you felt that writing more would be just dragging out the pain.
The one bright spot was Ben, nice to see a stepdad who is a good guy and who tries to help.
But I'm glad I can go on to the final chapter without waiting.
curiousfemmeover 11 years agoYou got me all weepy! I'm really enjoying this story and crossing my fingers for HEA.
musicfreakover 11 years agoAuthorYou know you guys are just awesome. If I was the emotional/sensitive type I would cry right now. Lol.
@ gobletholly182: your comment just put a smile on my face. It's always nice to see such comments. Your in depth analysis of the story just make me happy. Lol. And your constructive advice is noted. :)
