- Lesbian Sex
- Strange Day
- Page 3
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As I began to lick her pussy faster however I heard the door to the gym open and felt Carole move to get off me. I let out a small whimper as she did as I did not want this to end but I knew that if we were caught there would be stories flying around the school by the end of the day. I knew the last thing I wanted was for that to happen and moved quickly off the bench, grabbing my clothes as I did.
Carole then took my hand in hers and with a smile moved to the shower and watched as I put my clothes down. As I moved towards her she turned the shower on then moved towards me and kissed me softly on the lips.
"This is not the end Sarah," she said before she moved away from me and I felt the water splash over me.
All I knew was that I did not want it to be the end, that I wanted this to be the start of something between the two of us.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoYou can see there's a story here - probably a good one - but it is 100% unreadable. This really is some of the worst "writing" that I've encountered here in some time.
I suggest you work with one of Lit's volunteer editors before submitting again. (Perhaps fix this up and resubmit it)
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThe storyboard works fine but grammatical errors get in the way. Typically, it was repertitions of lines and words within paragraphs that distracted from the visit.
fameahskyabout 13 years agoThis was a great story.
I agree that you could have had someone edit it for you.
What was the biggest problem was the portion on the bus was unresolved.
Maybe, make a part two and tell us?
