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Click hereValerie showed up at the mansion at 7:00. Marcia, still naked, led her to the lounge where Charles waited for her. The small overnight bag with Sally's clothes hung from her hand.
"Good evening Master. How is Sally?"
"Sally has entered a new stage of submission, one I've never encountered personally before. It's very important that nothing gets in the way of her exploration of this new dimension. I have instructed her that she will be in submission 24/7 until further notice."
"24/7, Master? Does that mean that she is not coming home?"
"No, she will be going home with you. I need you to be her dominant whenever she is with you. She is not to dominate anyone for any reason."
"Master, I'm not sure I can do that. You know what happens when I try to punish."
"I'm not asking you to punish her. I doubt she will need it. She is in a very compliant place right now. What she needs from you is a focus for her submission. Demand service from her. Deny her. Humiliate her. Treat her like she was your slave. Can you do that for Sally?"
Valerie took a deep breath. "I'll try Master. I don't know though. I'm not very dominant. I mean, I've dominated her a few times, but those were only for short periods of time. I don't know if I can keep it up for the long term. Plus, we have the consulting job. If they need a whipping demo, I can't do it."
"I think you'll do fine. As for the consulting gig, she should still be able to participate. You can order her to do a demo of whipping you and maintain being dominant. In fact, you should try that tonight when you get home. Have her whip you as your submissive. You'll need to be very forceful to have her use enough force, but it can be done. It will help her grow. Anytime you have doubts about continuing, remember that. This will help the woman you love."
"I understand Master. Can I come over on short notice if I need help from you, either with Sally or to feel my own submission again?"
"Of course you can. By the way, do you still want to be auctioned next Saturday?"
"Oh yes, Master. I love being sold and used like that."
"Drop Sally off Friday night so I can take over and you can spend the weekend submitting to anyone you wish, who we know of course, and being auctioned on Saturday. You'll pick her up again on Sunday night."
"Thank you Master. Will you be at Mephisto's any time this weekend?"
"No, I want to move Sally to a safe place before I take her out in public. She's very vulnerable right now and could be easily hurt by someone who simply doesn't understand where she is. You two have such a good level of communication that I know you won't hurt her. Go ahead and fetch her from my room. You'll need this key. She's locked in the kennel."
Valerie looked at the key, uneasily holding it and finding herself in a position of dominating Sally for such a long time. It would be hard, but she trusted Charles and loved Sally. If Sally needed this from her, Valerie would give her the best she could. Resolutely, she headed for Charles' bedroom and her new full time submissive.
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Thanks again to D. for the great editing job. This story is writing itself again, just like the original Valerie stories did. Again, I love getting feedback, so let me know what you think.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoMy experience in bdsm is entirely second hand, primarily on Literotica and videos on certain websites. My favorite bondage websites are Hogtied, DeviceBondage, and SexuallyBroken.
I find “cum 12 times in an hour” arousing. “Until I’m bawling” pain is not my understanding of the “normal” bdsm that appeals to me, and it’s depiction is very different from what I find in the above-mentioned websites.
While there are exceptions, I do not find “until I’m bawling” to be a goal of the infliction of pain. I do not find as “normal” inflicting or enduring extreme pain as a goal in and of itself.
What I do find arousing, the fundamental aspect of bdsm that appeals to me, is the restraint and the pain that achieves the purpose of greatly intensifying the orgasm of the sub, or bottom. It is clear that the pleasure of the sub is the goal.
I like watching hot girls having screaming orgasms, far beyond those that could be endured without physical restraint, or could be achieved without heightened physical and/or mental stimulation. I like seeing sexual gratification of the “top” as part of this process.
This story has a main plot line of an accurate portrayal of bdsm, but at the same time shows main characters in a lifestyle that inflicts pain “until I’m bawling” as it’s own goal. In this story, Subs derive satisfaction solely from withstanding pain beyond the point of endurance, and Master inflicts pain with the use of safe words as an explicit goal, and without any thought of using heightened physical sensations as a tool for enhancing orgasm.
Shoot rules on the websites I like, as discussed in pre-shoot interviews with the models, specifically require breaking character and checking with the models immediately if tears appear, although some models state that they are “criers” and that tears are, for them, a release. “Handlers”, or tops, in pre-shoot interviews make clear to the models that tears are NEVER a goal. At no point do the scenes seek out pain to a point anywhere approaching uncontrollable sobbing. Use of safe words is rare on these websites, and then it is usually “yellow” or “mercy”, almost never “red”.
“Handlers” make clear in pre-shoot interviews with models that safe words are meant to be empowering for the models, and should be used for “I need some water” or “my nose itches” or “this rope needs to be adjusted”, and not just for “I can’t take anymore”. Safe words are a means of communication with the overall purpose of ensuring and enhancing the enjoyment of the sub.
Use of Safe words is depicted here as the goal of the Master; the whipping or other activity will not stop until the sub calls “red”. That is not at all my understanding of the type of bdsm that appeals to me.
To me, with an admittedly limited understanding, the portrayal in this story of bdsm with a goal of “until I’m sobbing” pain contradicts the purpose of “an accurate portrayal” that is the goal of the film in the plot line. To my limited understanding, any portrayal that does not include greatly enhanced pleasure of intense orgasms is misleading.
parawaabout 9 years agoI just found this on 'Random', and I like your work. When I have more time I will explore your other work. Are you still writing?
Adorably_Brokenalmost 16 years agoTruly wonderful, deep and beautiful. As a submissive woman and formerly a 24/7 slave (long story there) I found this story to be one of the best I have ever read.
I feel no shame in saying it made me cry remembering what the early stages of 24/7 were like and how much I miss that life.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoYour stories have all been great. This is the first time that I have commented on them, but they are very, very well written. Thanks for writing them. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 16 years agoplease keep it up, ive never been so into a story before, their lives feel so true....i cant wait for more
