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Click here"This is all never leaving my home. I am cutting it off of you as I find it unsuitable." A moment passed before he moved as he had expected her to say 'Cardinal' or run at this statement.
He pulled the small knife with the clip on it that he used as a money clip and started sawing at her undergarments. Two minutes later they were removed from both her body, and his sight. The two large globes of her ass now fixated him. It's pale beauty calling him and forcing him to determine his first course of action.
I like how this story is starting, I hope it continues to pick up speed....
Not as in paddles, but as in characters. There is nothing about these characters that makes the reader take an interest in them or their actions. Work on character development, please! Their actions in your story would be a lot more satisfying if one knew what they thought and felt. Include the anticipation and how it affects both of them, mentally and emotionally, not just physically. She acts meek and he gets hard...and????