I set about cleaning up the kitchen. The fridge was disgusting, even though there was no real food in there. Does a bottle of catsup count as food? I found some weird shit in the cabinets that I didn't know what to do with. There were a bunch of random handwritten notes that didn't make any sense, a lot of radio and computer parts, and even two cheap watches. I didn't know if I should throw the stuff away in case one of the guys came back, but then I thought, Fuck them! and dumped it all in the trash. I was surprised to find a few tools, screwdrivers, and a wrench, so I started a tool drawer. I took a break on the couch, which I had once again pushed to block the door. I really wanted to text Alicia, but I didn't want to blow it by being overanxious when I had seen her just a few hours ago. But I did it, I couldn't resist. I texted "Try not to think about me too much."
I regretted sending it instantly, until I saw her reply a few minutes later: "I'm trying" with a smiley face. Then I was glad I did.
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nice
I hope that it stays this nice. If not, I'll probably like it anyway. Great start.
Nothing i've never seen before
but its done pretty competently so i'll stick around for the ride.
Fantastic
Take your time. Do it right.
But you HAVE to finish this story.
Seriously. This is too good to leave everyone in suspense.
Sorry....
I don't think that a chapter a week is going to keep your readers happy. If a little is good, a lot is better. :-)
Thank you...
I'm enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing.
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