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Click hereFirst semester was a bitch, not academically, but socially. I don't think cell phones were invented yet, if they were no one I knew had one. This was the snail-mail-and-shared-pay-phone in the dorm lobby era. We only saw each other twice. She came over for the Christmas party at my frat. For the first time, we made it nearly as far as that night in her basement, for my part, even further. For the first time, my hand moved under her panties. My middle finger was pressing into her wetness when my idiot roommate knocked, explaining when I jerked open the door that he had forgotten his fucking toothbrush.
Over Christmas break, she broke up with me. Her former boyfriend had never accepted no for an answer. He pestered her with pages long love poems and shit. She said we weren't breaking up. She just needed time to straighten out her head. She didn't want to see either of us.
Very good and lively description of a fundamental process of exploration and discovery that initiate us as sexual being. A good build-up to a continuation...
Humor, innocence, and maturity make a good story. Hope there is more to come.
I like this story I hope you keep righting these story s or one like it I think it needs a seven for story line it kep me reading tank you
I like your style and the story could be that of any one of your readers, including mine. You fessed up to the errors up front, so I'll not mention those that needed a red pencil. But it totally represents the sexual awakening that most teens must go through on the journey toward adulthood. Maybe I should have given a five, up the ultimate should be saved for the truly best.
Our campground was the furthest from the river. The ranger had steered us to a beautiful spot. The ground had a gentle slope and if the ground was rocky the thick blanket of pine needles hide the fact. The showers were a couple hundred yards away and it's was half-mile hike to the river, but it was a great spot. We pitched our cheap Sears &Roebuck tents in an open area under the trees.
pine needles hid the fact.
and it was a half-mile hike
cheap Sears & Roebuck
Your mistakes?