Jordan closed his eyes, feeling like all his energy had been drained, which he supposed, it had been. But it felt like he could fall asleep and not wake up for a thousand years, as long as Summer was still beside him when he did.
And just as he began to drift off, he felt her lift her head up and felt her lips on his cheek. "Oh, by the way, I love you too." She whispered.
Jordan smiled, then let sleep take over.
~~~ End ~~~
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nice job...but
took me back to my first time but not hers... however i still enjoyed it
Lovely ...
fantasy ... unless you lived it ... a really tender story ... paced just right.
Great!!!
Really loved the story!
Good details, but try to elaborate and draw things out a bit more. Otherwise really really good!!
Wow
I am currently a virgin with a serious girlfriend and I was just in awe. Great story. I would love to read more in the future
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