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Click hereMy instinct was to carry her to the ground, to thrust on top of her and pin her down, but she wouldn't let that happen. Her legs locked against the railing and she tensed, ramming her body against me, still contracting; that extinguished the last of my self-control. I exploded; the feeling of my cum sent her into another wave of ecstasy and we clung together, locked in a helpless – powerless – embrace, our bodies heaving, her crying out as her body milked every last drop from my cock.
We stayed that way after the tremors had subsided, and then Lina lifted herself off of me. She dressed in silence, the rain still washing down her porcelain body in rivulets. I was spent, unable to move, and speechless. Even now she seduced me, every move of her body graceful in its calculation.
She walked toward me, barefoot, and pressed her lips to mine. Her lips were gentle, silken – as spellbinding as the rest of her – and she drew my lower lip into her mouth to deepen the kiss.
As she pulled away, that ever-familiar smile was on her face.
"Thanks for the bear," she murmured.
And then she was gone.
This time, for good.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis was a great read. I'm sure anyone who is lucky enough to stumble upon this story will be instantly transported back in time to those halcyon days of adolescent bliss when we were first able to find an attraction to someone that was returned in kind. The discovery of the power, magic, and all consuming, life altering fulfillment of exploring the parts, response's, and passions of our opposite half stay with us forever!! Thank you Ashes to Stardust for the trip down memory lane. You Rock!!!
Anonymousover 8 years agoI don't comment on Literotica. Ever. But I needed to comment on this: the story and prose are just stunningly good, super well paced, and reminded me of my own days gone by. Bravo.
jdf1959over 8 years agoThank you for this lovely, truly erotic piece - it's not just the narrator who can bask in the afterglow of a wonderful encounter that you know he will always treasure.
Do write more.
TonyZeeover 8 years agoYou're a real writer. I enjoyed this very much. You've created such a beguiling character in Lina. Great job.
