Steve went on to explain that Jack was a friend of his, that the two of them had set me up so he could fuck me. He had wanted to fuck me the first time he laid eyes on me. Steve also stated that if I wanted Jack to screw me he would set it up and we could use his apartment as Jack was eagerly awaiting his chance to fuck me since I had sent him home with a case of blue balls on a couple of occasions.
Jack had wanted to fuck me, with Steve, the first time but Steve said he had wanted me all to himself for the first time. Steve also stated that if I would want to make some "extra money" he had some customers that would be more than willing to pay good money to have sex with me.
This was the start to my summer which was going to prove to be very interesting!!
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enjoyed the story
will there be a sequel? tell us about the rest of the summer. Maybe dad gets a bj while she works a gloryhole?
Fucking idiotic.
Don't submit works you obviously wrote while drunk.
There is potential there,
but it's hidden behind some awkward phrasing. Also the pacing of the story could be better. I could picture what you were writing about and with a few nudges it would be a really hot story. 3*
Maybe try the editing section of the bulletin board and see if you can get a beta-reader or plot editor who could help you.
Above all, keep writing.
Cheers
CharlieB4more...
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