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Click hereSusi again asked for my seed. I continued to make love to her, tenderly, and minutes later, I told her I was about to empty into her. She arched her back, and began to cry softly, and beg, and she called me 'sir' for the last time. I gave her my seed, emptying it deeply within her. I held myself there, to make sure she knew that I had held nothing back from her.
I didn't go with her to the airport. We said our good-byes in her apartment, putting on a false face of confidence that we'd see each other again. I kissed her one last time, and said I had to go (I didn't want her to see the effect this separation would have on me).
As I left the apartment, Susi said, "I will have you with me when I reach Durban."
I don't know when Susi cleaned up next, but when she called me from Durban, I asked her about my seed. She said that she had indeed carried it back with her. We kept in touch, but inevitably time and distance took its toll. To my knowledge, Susi hasn't returned to the U.S.
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I hope you found this story enjoyable, enlightening, and consistent. I also ask that you take a minute to rate it (and maybe comment on it), so that I know your perceptions about my style of writing. Thanks.
Thoughts:
' Remember, life is to be lived, not just read about.'
'Sometimes, seduction is just as fulfilling as the act itself...'
You did a marvelous job. I love a romance, and this was one. Perhaps they'll meet again, or maybe a child of hers will look him up some day. I can see why this gets high marks. This was two people who happened to have different color skin.
I really enjoyed this story. The writing was very good and the story line was well defined, the characters nicely developed, and the melding of cultures and breaking down of racial barriers made it well worth reading. Thanks again for another great read!
Lovely and very realistic--I like how the two people were represented as real individuals and not racial stereotypes.
Awesome story! Your writing style is excellent. Great character development and wonderful pacing to the story. Your characters were very realistic and convincing; they reacted to the events in the story much in the way that I imaging people would react, including the apprehension felt by the lead male when going to meet Suzi in person. Too often in submission stories the male characters are fearless and unconcerned with anything other than ordering their partners around. Suzi's growth in the story was also well depicted. Nice job. One of the best stories I've read in a while.
very good
was taken in by it
keep it going would be good to do a follow up story of say ten years gap