Sweet Revenge Ch. 06

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haremgirl
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Richard dove to the side just as the pistol fired. A searing pain erupted in his chest, as he fell to the ground. He moaned and rolled onto his back. Looking up, he saw the other man grinning down at him with triumph. He yanked the scarf from Richard's head and smeared it with his blood, before he turned and left the tent.

Richard moaned again, feeling a weariness like he had never felt before. He could hear Samiya's shrieks, but he didn't have the strength to turn and look at her. He lay still, as coldness seeped through his body.

How wrong he had been, about William Sinclair, about his plans for revenge, and especially about Karina! He had been so sure that she loved him. His mind groped for another explanation for her actions, but he couldn't think of one. Rawlins couldn't have known so much about Richard's relationship with Karina, unless she had told him the details herself.

Richard tried to blot out the searing pain in his chest, and he felt his lifeblood draining out on the ground beneath him. His vision clouded, growing dimmer as his lids felt suddenly very heavy, and he let them drop over his eyes. His last thought was to wonder why Karina had betrayed him, before blackness closed in around him, carrying him into oblivion.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
didn't need to go here

a twist too far!

why make more pain?

clark3001clark3001over 14 years ago
A different version of Marrying for Money

Change a few details from excellent Marrying For Money and presto...you have Sweet Revenge. Richard had spies in the Sinclair house, Abdul was one of them and now very conveniently none of them saw Samiya arrive ? Please don't use the formula for this story again and let your imagination get a fresh start for you can write very well as evidenced in Marrying for money.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
this is another's work

this story is word for word from a book that I have read in paper back. It is a published romance novel

Nightowl22Nightowl22almost 18 years ago
Now everyone is in trouble

It looks like Richard is dying, maybe dead, and Karina will be given in marriage to Rawlins. If he sleeps with Karina he best keep one eye open, though.

What will Rawlins think about Karina's child, or rather what will he think about marrying Karina when he finds out she's pregnant?

With Richard dying, or dead, who will rescue Karina? Who can help Richard? Fatima? Can she have him up and running within 24 hours? And what will the village do with Samiya?

I'm hoping harengirl tells us all, very soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Very good

Your sheik story and Nicola_Italia's and DeepEmerald's are the only ones I read. Unlike another one I read here which has no substance at all. All the three of you had good story line and plot instead of some crappy teen sex stories.

Thanks very much!

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