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Click hereHe held her in his arms just as much as she was holding him as they waited for their breath, bodies and senses return to earth. The room suddenly became bright with colors flashing around them. It was now time to watch the fireworks outside, while they lay in the comfort of each other’s glow from their own fireworks.
What had started quite differently for each of them had now become one feeling; a feeling for each other. He had never wanted to care and she never thought she could, but what they found in each other was as sweet as an ice cream sundae with a cherry on top.
I agree with you Lukas, it was hurried. I vasilated a great deal about the genre of the story. In the end I decided to go with the romance instead of erotica route. I see now this story could have been far more.
Wow that was so sexy, romantic, sensual and hot, That is what every girl wants her first time with someone to be like. Reading that story almost ruins me for any guy, I will always have in my head the ultimate romantic love story with a modern twist given they met on the Internet.
What the last reader said about it being a classic hes right a modern classic.
Please keep writing I'm looking forward to more stories.
A completely turned on fan,
Jes1701
Such a moving build-up - such a hurried conclusion. This could have been a classic.....
Lukas