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For a moment I thought my heart was going to stop and drop out of my ass at the vulnerability he showed to me.
"Well say something love. It's not every day when you have a totally sexy music sensation bears his true thoughts and feelings to people." he said the cockiness returning to his voice replacing vulnerability that was there moments before.
"See that right there makes me think you're not serious." I said irritated that, for a fleeting moment, I thought there was more to him then what he showed the public.
'What a fat joke!' I thought standing up and grabbing my coffee cup.
"Thanks for the coffee but I have to go." And without another word I walked out.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 11 years agoIn the first chapter he had a million dollar smile, but then it changed to a 1000 watt smile. Maybe they are equal, but I doubt it. That would be $1000 per watt. Then in this chapter it's only a $100 smile. In Seattle his rental vehicle started out as a truck, then became a Jeep, and finally it was a Range Rover. Keep trying, with an editor in future -- especially for grammar, punctuation and word forms (and consistency).
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI would have given you 4 or 5 stars if it was more readable. Please get an editor before posting any more chapters.
The content is good, the story line as well, but the grammatical & spelling errors make it almost unreadable.
Anonymousabout 11 years agomore. how many more chapters. does it end happy. does she get to "one up" her snotty brother and sister in law? does dad finally get to see she is as worthy as his jerk of a son? THANK YOU
