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Click here"Put your finger in!" Chelsea ordered looking down at herself to see her bunghole puckering and then gapping a bit relaxing under the pleasurable onslaught.
Breeana nodded and then circled her sphincter a dozen times before sinking the digit inside. This did the trick. Chelsea grabbed her young teens hand and pulled it down at the same time she grabbed the teens head and pulled that down as well. Breeana instantly started licking around were her digit was poking inside. Chelsea felt her body tingle to the point it felt like it was on fire and then she was wrapping her legs around Breeana's head. She pulled the hand away from her pussy and pulled her victim's face to fill the space. Miss Duncan licked there and started working her finger in and out of her butthole with rapid speed. She added a finger to her the cunthole as Chelsea pulled her mouth up to the clit.
Looking down she had the hugest orgasm of her life, it always seemed that way when she was with a captive, Breeana's pouty lips wrapped around her clitoris. Tugging the sensitive flesh up and letting it snap away. Her hand was pumping so hard the tiny teens mini-boobs were jiggling back and forth. The orgasm took her and she let the tazer gun go from her hand. It really was the biggest of her life as blackness settled down on her. It couldn't have been more than thirty seconds maybe even a full minute that she was out. But when she came too she was alone in the bathroom.
"Fuck!" She swore rolling over and as quick as she could she got dressed, taking just a moment to look over the bathroom to make sure she hadn't forgotten anything.
She saw the corner of something sticking from one of the sinks and when she went to it grabbing out the magazine the teen had been reading. She darted from the bathroom tucking tazer and magazine into her bag and then keeping her face looking at the floor in case there was cameras as she made her way out of the mall. She sat in her car pulling a old sweater from under a seat and rubbing at her still wet face. Driving away she went across the road and waited. After an hour she knew there was no police going to be called as they would have showed up already. Pretty little Breeana had been eager till it was over and then had lost her nerve and ran away. Ran away maybe for the second time that day and most likely she'd be returning home.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoOne of the best stories on this site. Would LOVE to see more like it's theme.
Seriously, well done!
Deflueralmost 12 years agoAuthorI love when ANONYMOUS people tell me to be mature and not offended by comments. But I do admit there will ALWAYS be grammatical and spelling errors. I've seen the complaint before and will see it again, once more my defense is the same. I am doing this for FREE. Plus I've tried the editor thing, it's not at all as easy as just finding one, so you should do your research first.
Also pre-placing an insult makes you the asshole, well thought out and probably accurate comments or not, you are still the asshole. Once more, if everyone who wrote for this site had to be up to the par that some peoples exacting expectations there with would be very little submissions, especially now that good erotic writers can earn money for their content over at the E-Reader sites. I don't think I am a professional or even semi-profession author, thus I put my stuff here, FOR FREE. To be enjoyed and I guess flamed by trolls.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoFirst and foremost, find an experienced editor and secure their help.
You have several grammatical errors and several misspelled words.
I give you kudos for your story line, but you lack an extreme strong amount of detail.
The entire point of writing, especially sexually oriented stories, that are obviously fantasies, is to fill in/provide all the detail, in vivid color.
Leave nothing to the imagination, you want your audience to see and feel what you see and feel.
Other wise, you are just providing fill in the blank stories.
Stop pretending to write like a girl. Your lack of extraordinary emotional depth and maturity, will not allow you, to come close to writing from a girl’s/woman’s prospective.
You are too shallow.
Your, choice of word, no girl or woman, ever uses the term “corn hole”
Last but not least, if you are so thin skinned, that you are put off or offended by my well thought out comments, then stop writing and placing yourself in a position to be criticized, stay in your mother's basement and continue to jerk off.
Anonymousover 13 years agomelted my vaseline...give me more...studrox at yahoo dotcom
