Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 32

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"He will recover," she pronounced. "And then you will gather what you need, including those Fighters he came with, and get out of Beshenna. I don't want any of you or your trouble in my city while I put it back together."

"Trouble?" Talla put as much innocence in her voice as she could manage.

"I felt you in the mesh last night," she squinted her eyes as if to squeeze better memories from her brain. "Felt his thoughts ... and your thoughts. You are a very strange pair, both in the existence of your bond and the dangerous layers of rebelliousness inside it. The implication of monogamous desire alone ..."

Talla gulped, glad the golden woman looked away while searching her mind.

"Half of me thinks I should execute you both and be done with it," the Goddess's voice echoed with a disconnected intellectual quality. "But you still saved my city. You served me dinner, so to speak, and the dessert contained no poison. So I trust you're of no further danger."

Her gaze fell on Talla once more. "At least not for now. Such things are not mine to decide."

"Not yours to decide?" Talla's jaw dropped. "You're a Goddess."

"Probably not mine to decide, then," the golden woman nodded. "I've never been a Goddess before. These are matters for the gods above."

"Oh," Talla jerked back in surprise. "I didn't know they still talked to people."

"They don't, generally, child," the Goddess said. "But perhaps to you two, they will."

Talla's eyes widened and she sat in silence as Zhair'lo's head lolled and he finished suckling. Surplus milk ran in a small rivulet from the golden nipple, down the underside of the Goddess's breast to be soaked up by the black top still wrapped around her ribs. She laid Zhair'lo back on the bed, brushed his hair off his face and settled him in on his pillow.

"I will give you a sigil," the golden woman did not meet Talla's eyes, saving her gaze for Zhair'lo alone. "It will allow you to travel to Prima. There you can ask the gods what should be done with you. I should like to be told if you get an answer, though I doubt I will live long enough-" she self-consciously brushed her greying hair back with her fingers "- for such a message to reach me. Such is the price the gods have decreed I pay for my service to them."

"Eminence," Talla nodded gratefully.

"Now get yourself dressed," the Goddess refastened her top and rose up over Talla imperiously. "I don't know what goes for propriety in your city, but this-" she waved at a hand at the bed where she and Zhair'lo had slept together "-will not stand in mine."

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"Mistress!" the dark-haired Virgin attendant came down the dark, cold stairs in a rush. "You are requested above."

The woman in Adept's Yellows stood over a desk, examining scores of hastily scrawled notes, trying to make sense of them as she lined them up with much older, unrolled scrolls scattered about the massive space she'd been assigned.

"Takana," she sighed heavily. "I've masturbated all I can to help with the recovery operation. I know I've got four Within upgrades, but my clit is already raw, I don't care how much of that oil I put on it."

"It is not the recovery that needs you, Mistress Maksa," the voice of the girl in white showed strain. "It is the Sorceress of Pussy."

"Pussy needs me?" Maksa looked up.

"She desires a report, I believe," Takana emphasized the instruction by lifting her skirt to reveal the bare bit of light fuzz covering her mound and making a small horizontal motion across her genitals with one finger. Maksa knew this as a signal used by the genealogical conspirators of Beshenna.

"Stay here and guard my work, then," Maksa said hastily as she sped away. She turned back at the stairs to shake a threatening finger, "And for the gods' sake, don't move anything."

She bolted up the spiral metal stairs into the frenetic havoc of Sweetness's Hall. Exhausted women, scheduled for recovery operations both personal and structural, hurried to and fro, a far more energetic chaos than she had ever seen back home.

'But their Temple's just Fallen and been put back together. What could one expect?'

In a moment, she passed up another set of stairs into Pussy's Domain and through to see the Sorceress. Attendants sealed the doors and, one by one, removed their skirts and other assorted bottoms. Conspirators all, they waited.

"Anna, are we secure?" the Sorceress asked an Officer.

"The Goddess apparently finds us innocent in this affair."

"We are innocent," Pussy pointed out. "At least of murder, but the project will fall far behind now."

Maksa recognized this. The Goddess, Ascended from Form, would never consider involving herself in their project. It might even rank as suicide to ask. With considerable haste, the new Goddess had chosen the former Sorceress of Lips to Ascend as Queen of Sweetness, also blocking them out of that station. With all of the suspicion Endowment had raised before her murder and subsequent death, even getting the Sorceress of Pussy pregnant had become dangerously untenable.

On the other hand, that series of initial, decisive moves had ended the Goddess's declarations. She had attached no further statements regarding the reason for Endowment's sedition, nor any conditions or watch over Principia Pussy.

And, on top of that, they had ensured the safety of Magnus. They had protected him at the heart of the Temple, in the nursery like every other babe. The latest generation of their experimentation lived and could go on someday to have progeny of his own.

"Tell us, Maksa," the Sorceress sighed. "What have you found?"

"I was right," Maksa declared. "There is something in the women. I haven't pinned it down yet, but there are behaviours among the women that vary considerably during the Fall. If I can find out which ones matter - how the tendencies manifest in women - we can chart a new course for the breeding program."

Pussy inhaled deeply. "You are certain?"

"I'm the right woman, in the right place for once," Maksa said. "But we need to collect every bit of information from the last week - get every woman to answer honestly - and I can build up a proper record to work from. The answer's there, though, I know it."

Pussy nodded and looked slowly around the room of half-naked women.

"You shall have it, my dear. You shall have everything you need."

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A vast convoy formed up at the hastily repaired main gate of Beshenna's Temple. Carters lined up their horses to carry loads of wounded men and women to safer places, even while work crews worked to fortify damaged walls. Two days had done much to clear the ash from the air, and cremations and spates of rainy weather had taken care of the fouler stenches.

"Headed out already?" Chief Cameron nodded as Zhair'lo's squad formed up with the rest of the early departure convoy headed west to Gern. "There are still Enraged out there you could help us kill."

Zhair'lo nodded, understanding the warning in the gentle jibe. The Goddess's Ascension had killed every Enraged man with a hundred metres or so of the Temple's centre. Beyond that, others throughout the city had been rendered unconscious, much like the Catatonic, which the Temple had targeted for 'recovery'. But out beyond the city limits, where her power couldn't reach, the Goddess's enemies still lurked.

"We'll keep our eyes open, Sir," Zhair'lo promised as he looked around at those who'd be accompanying him. "I see Dol'ya, but where's the other Second, Tia?"

"The Sorceress of Within, you mean?"

"Oh," Zhair'lo replied, taken back. "I hadn't heard."

"She's stuck here now, poor thing," the Chief declared. He nodded at the bevy of Fighters arrayed about the convoy. "But you'll be plenty safe with all of these along. Have a good trip, Soldier."

"Sir!" Zhair'lo nodded as Cameron walked away.

Surveying the crowd, he saw that Shanata accompanied Talla yet, along with a number of Soldiers and members of Form Zhair'lo recognized. He continued scanning until his eyes met a pair staring straight back at him. He and the woman held each other's gaze as she approached him.

"Zhair'lo."

"Sonja."

"Mistress Sonja," she corrected.

Zhair'lo remained silent, glaring at her.

"I see you're well recovered today,"she noted, her eyes now staring intently over his head. "Only two days from your intended death."

"My intended ... how did you -?"

With a harrumph, Sonja turned on her heel and walked away.

Talla's thoughts rushed through his brain an instant later: 'It was her?! Why in the nine hells would she violate orders to save you?'

'I don't think we've ever understood her, Talla.'

'Madra Zen. I guess not.'

Zhair'lo closed his eyes and watched with Talla's instead as the groups formed up more officially. Through her mind, he watched her picking out those she knew and those she didn't, sorting the grievously wounded from the lightly injured, and critiquing the order of the wagons.

'Something wrong?' he wondered into her mind.

'I wouldn't have done it like this,' she told him. 'It isn't efficient, with the most wounded having to walk all the way to the front of the van.'

'They're the most likely to have to stop, though,' Zhair'lo pointed out. 'In order to rebandage and what not. We'd hate to leave them behind.'

Recalculations swirled in Talla's mind, and the order suddenly became more congruous.

'You feeling okay?'

'A bit achy,' she indicated her vagina. 'Kirana wasn't very gentle jabbing me like that.'

Zhair'lo gave her a mental nod of assent before opening his eyes.

'What now, Talla?'

'Now back to Gern. Zoe and Illya and everyone else deserve to know what happened, why we can never do what we planned.'

'Then to Prima?'

'We'll take as many as want to go. I think the sigil gives us that much. Then let's see what the gods have to say.'

'You really think they'll talk to us?'

'Why wouldn't they? We're pretty important, aren't we?'

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The Queen of Form in Gern sat awake late into the night, pouring over the reports coming back from Beshenna. Message handlers flagged armaments orders for her attention, along with requests for clothing, escorts for merchants, and maintenance requests for various buildings throughout the barracks.

She filled them out, carefully checking over the work of her underlings before signing them off and sending them on their way.

A particular scroll sat at the far corner of her desk, still rolled up and untouched.

She couldn't look at that one yet.

Not if she expected work to get done.

One by one, she dismissed her Disciples, sending them off to various parts of Gern on one last errand before a much deserved rest.

At last, all reports accounted for, she dismissed the attendants from her innermost sanctum and rose up to take the last scroll in hand. She walked out the back of her office and stood on the balcony, facing a crescent moon on the eastern horizon.

With a deep breath, she cracked the scroll, unrolled it and scanned down the list of names formally written there, reading them carefully by the light of the single, flickering torch at her back.

The writer had divided the parchment into sections according to the places where battles had occurred, and further broken it into sub-sections for the types of casualties.

Form's heart stopped as she found the name.

Under, "Rear guard, holding Sweetness Gate while the gate closed", listed under, "Death by indeterminate instrument", the short list of names included, "Master Kendrick Ofarin, Gern".

She lurched against the railing of the balcony, her body nearly doubling over as a brief, silent sob racked through her and threatened her balance. Her heart ached, melting with the loss of the unspeakable thing the reading of that name had cost her. She'd known he wouldn't be coming back, but the list sealed his death forever, and her liquified heart attested to the pain this knowledge caused.

Form straightened, calling upon her many upgrades to control her body and stand tall once more. The liquid in her breast congealed, then solidified, became again a structure of stone and cold metal. She had a job to do, and she would do it for as many more years as the gods gave her.

But she would never do it as she had done it for him.

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Author's Afterword:

Thanks to Mr. Ken Scades for all his fabulous help in making me a better writer throughout the production of this novel.

Thanks to Literotica for hooking me up with this audience.

Thanks to all of you for your votes, your comments, your follows on twitter, your connections on skype. Thanks for every email you've sent, every correspondence we've had.

Feel free to drop me a line and let me know how the story made you feel, who your favourite characters were, what hit you the hardest and what felt the weakest or whom I've forgotten.

I love hearing from you because your reactions are what make this effort worthwhile.

Cheers,

Xavier Torch.

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 Anonymousabout 1 year ago
Just did a re read....and I loved it even more

MIKE: I made a huge mistake and somehow clicked on this story again. Whoops...it totally sucked me in like it held perfection in facial. I've blown off some calls and a few work things the last few days as I've just been addicted to it all over again.

Frankly, I loved it even more this time. While I've always been able to follow the divisions and ranks and characters like Zhai can identify the number of abundance upgrades, the reread has allowed me to see little things and subtle bit's of foreshadowing that I missed the first time. For instance, I thought Endowment was working on gunpowder on the first read, but now realize it was "sorceress training ", if you will. And I thought of Maksa s latest research more about a genetic trait being passed on to men and glossed over the actual enraged woman. And as an econ guy, I was delighted by the "who knows that facial did with the coins at the bazaar" magic way to make the economy work without having to explain it.

Maybe this weekend I will respond to some of the previous comments to add my two cents, but I'm afraid I might not hold my tongue pointing out all the things my fellow commenters misunderstood. It is a rich, complex, detailed story (part of the reason Iove it) but if if you read Harry Potter then you should be able to follow this.

Torch, I have faith that you will give us more of these exceptional characters in the amazing world you have built that has everything except dragons "because clearly, that would be ridiculous". But even more so, I look forward to the societal implications of the next piece. The question of who is using who and who is protecting who and societal cohesion versus free will to make your own choices that can result in suffering for you or others is particularly relevant right now. It has been an interesting way to weigh the various character decisions and helps add even more layers to this world and this story.

But mostly, I really look forward to the third installment of your story. :D

 Anonymousover 1 year ago
Truly looking forward to book three of Talia's Temple now that Two Hundred Dollars is done.

Posted earlier, but for some reason Literotica never displayed, so lets try again. . .

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“Hard to believe that the same person wrote this as the other stories . . .The other [Stories – ie: Talia's Temple], well, least said soonest mended."--

- A back-handed slap by one of the Anonymous Two Hundred Dollars commenters.

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Seriously?! I was one of the many people who had been waiting patiently for the return of Taila's Temple, I must confess, i was deeply disappointed when Xtorch announced that Taila's temple was going to take a back seat to 200 dollars, but I respected that Xtorch was following his Muse, so I stayed silent...spanking is not my thing, although I was able to enjoy it in Tallia’s temple because it was only one flavor of the entire pallet. I saw the enthusiasm of the spanking fetish aficionado’s and i was happy for them. It never occurred to me to trash his work because, "spanking was not my thing"

I have read a number of the chapters of Two Hundred Dollars and unlike you i can see the same thoughtful, empathic qualities of Xtorches writing styles. Yes, I very much hope he is getting better, practice make perfect and it is clear he has made a conscious, obvious attempt to continue his writing experience.

At risk of being politically incorrect - good for him!!!

He is a very gifted writer, and yes, with practice he's getting even better, is that really such a sin?

I know Xtorch felt he left Tallia's Fallen temple on a note of semi-closure, but anyone familiar with the series would recognize that he left many questions unanswered, and some of the answered questions we got gave birth to new questions, opening many other doors. (which is often the sign of good storytelling.)

The Goddess of Brishanna, being relatively old and not very talented in the goddesses magic, is going to die within the year, and Zhairlo, who almost died last time is their only realistic hope.

Its pretty clear that despite the religious theme, the Goddess of Gern doesn't just operate by crossing their fingers and praying, the Goddess takes charge and dictates, and her subordinates MAKE it happen.

If the Goddess of Bershen fails to establish a stable environment, There is a very realistic possibility that they may have to go though this again, in a year, and the goddess will plan accordingly, its been at least a year and since Tallia's set her service for 5 time a week (the maximum), she will probably be due for multiple upgrades soon . . . at least in theory.

In reality, Gern’s Goddess will realize that Zhairlo, barely survived and that he only survived because of Tallia . . . after all a certain Adept of Iron, under the Gern’s Goddesses direct orders, defied Breshenna’s Godess and opened the sealed door for Talia.

Talia has almost no upgrades besides Abundance, how was she able to keep up with Form's caravan? . . . clearly no one expected her too . . . so how did she do it? Purely with her formidable, yet clearly limited innate reserve, which might not be enough for next year.

If they want to maximize, their chance of success, they are going to need to upgrade Talia, give her the abilities that do not draw upon her general inborn reserve.

It's pretty obvious she can handle doubles upgrades without a problem and giving her doubles in anything (except maybe abundance) would get her up to speed in less than a year. how they will justify that publicly, will be interesting but they have already proven to be morally flexible when the situation presents. This would be our equivalent of national security. I'm sure so long as form and sweetness get corresponding upgrades for their women it will all balance out. The second of abundance declared Tallia a "sister" although this was originally a mere formality, she has clearly subsequently taken it more seriously, since the incident with form and the expedition to breshenna, which they reluctantly allowed her to undertake, and further backed her play by providing Shanada.

No-one really didn't expect her to succeed.

I bet the leading sisters of Abundance, feel vindicated now – they might not be able to acknowledge it publicly - but there is a certain satisfaction in knowing you bucked the odds and won, especially when that victory helped save uncounted thousand of lives. That feeling is often contagious.

I think it's pretty obvious by now sweetness/pussy have been breeding better children to increase the Temples control of the cities and surrounding regions.

A Responsible Goddess will want to Upgrade Tallia, because Talia/Zhalio might have to re-engage if Breshannas queen fails, and she just might.

Its also obvious that the temple, despite it official declared track, has different secret tracks for different people; Unbroken Virgin - yup we got a track for you - just stay in the convent dormitories, we'll get a seal breaker in here any month now . . . yep, aaaaannnnnyyyyyy month now, btw-feel free to pleasure your yourselves while we find a seal breaker, they do pop up from time to time doncha’ know . . . Oh! Officer track why didn't you say so, we got your upgrades right here, please wait right here by the red carpet, be with you in just a moment.

It seems so clear . . .Talia need to be upgraded, and plans need to be implemented before the years end . . . except Talia and Zhailo also bear a seal from another Goddess . . . . a seal that might just set them free.

Can't wait to see how you resolve this!

PS: Saw some interesting data that might go well with your take on "Within", including the effects of withdraw from women of Within. "Im looking at you . . . . enraged Brisharians . . ". Interesting stuff.

The key hormone involved might be Copulins, (or even a strengthened mutated form of Copulins,) and the method of transmission is sneakily insidious, and the purported potential effects sound similar to effects of Frank Herbert’s Bene Gessurite imprinters like Margot Fenrig in the initial Dune and later chronicals. No wonder, Within is almost every initiates dream choice, (Unless you follow your heart like Tallia did.)

Consider doing a search on Copulins, take what you need, throw away the rest. . .

Thank you for a wonderful world and series. - SSS

DracosBabyDracosBabyover 1 year ago
Book 3 please!

Great job on this series. Looking forward to see book 3 dropping chapters.

wowinfidelwowinfidelalmost 2 years ago
More please..

I just finished the story. Really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it. Hope you write more of it. There are so many loose ends.. Really would like to know what happens next..

 Anonymousalmost 2 years ago
Yes you should continue!

In response to Xtorch's above comment, It would be lovely if you were to start on Talla pt. 3 after THD is finished.

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