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Her body collapsed on the bed, replete once more.
Knowing it wasn't her desire driving this vulgar behavior was both a relief and a terrible shock, especially with that lewd demonstration; it brought it home how deeply she was out of control. Feeling him remove the dildo from both her orifices she looked startled at what she had done to herself.
The thing was long and fat and she had greedily consumed it. Even now she wanted to hold onto it only his grip was stronger than hers. When it was finally dragged from her body she felt a sense of loss. Still under the influence of the orgasm a nasty thought crossed her mind, driven by a deep feeling of satisfaction, that it might not be so bad after all.
Shaking her head free of the alien thought she keenly kept her hands away from both nipples all the time intently staring at them in horror. Once more she slumped onto the bed feeling exhausted.
He looked at her thinking perhaps this was going to be too much for him. How could he possibly satisfy her if she were to play with her nipples again?
A sly grin crossed her face. "My! That was fantastic. I have never ever done anything like that before. I think I must have." She started to say, and then stopped. Not wanting to spill the sordid secret of how many orgasms she had experienced to him.
It was time to take back some control of the situation. "I must go home. Can you get me some clothes? I don't know what could possibly fit these huge things." She said.
"I paid off the lease for your apartment so there is no where to go. All your things are in storage. You should stay here. Besides, your bank account was wiped out paying for the surgery.
"You did what?" She asked not wanting to believe how her life had been turned upside down. "I can't go out like this! People will stare. I'm a freak. I certainly can't go to the next school looking like a Barbie doll. Now you tell me my savings are gone. I thought I could have these breasts reduced but I don't have the money. If there's anything else I'll kill you. She shouted at him.
***
It was dark when she awoke; coming too hoping it had all been a nightmare finding it was only too true she shivered in fright. Her whole world had changed. "I can't go out like this. What am I to do?" She said half to herself partly asking Andrew.
While she slept he had thought about what to do with her for it was patently obvious he wouldn't be able to cope with her by himself. It would take some time for him to come to terms with what he had done to her but he wasn't ready to tell her his plans, while she too was hardly ready to cope with the idea.
"I've nowhere to go and I can't go out looking for an apartment, even if I had the money, so it looks as though I have to stay here."
She looked at him meanly. "So, you have yourself a captive sex doll." She spat the words at him. "Do you realize what you have done to me? Where am I to get the money to undo this, this." She said waving her arms about her body careful not to touch it.
He moved to sit close to her meaning to comfort her.
"No! Don't touch me. Please. We will have to sort this mess out. You will have to help me, you must. Please!" She begged.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoI liked the story!
Some of the negative comments are pretty severe. Here's how I look at this story:
The main aspect of the story that is impossible, is the electrical implant attached to her nipples, "an experimental device" that "sends an electrical signal... direct into the brain" and basically consumes her mind until she has a huge orgasm. Okay, so that's impossible. But this story is in the Mind Control category. Read some of the other stories on this site about people mind-controlled by various inventions, magic, people with supernatural abilities, and the like, and tell me - are they any more believable in terms of making mind control actually exist? This story requires suspension of belief in the mind control device, like other stories here, and like stories about concepts such as vampires. If one can suspend disbelief about the main concept, the rest of the story becomes perhaps improbable but not necessarily impossible.
I like the fact that while what Andrew did would deserve jail time, at least he has the decency to be sorry about what he did and to try to help her. To me, the interaction between Andrew and Evelyn after the surgery is the main thing that lifts this story up from being another guy-turned-girl-into-bimbo type of mind control story and makes me root for the characters to somehow have a happy ending, as happy as it can be under the circumstances.
FWIW, here's one example of a negative comment from someone who obviously found other aspects of the story impossible. I contend, not so:
> 1) How could he pay off her apartment lease?
> 2) How could the hospital take the money from her bank account without her authorization?
> 3-6) She'll bite-off his dick, sue him, the hospital, his dad...
For #1&2 - Andrew used her key, went to her apartment, and got on her laptop. Some people have zero security on their computer at home. Her email & bank logins/passwords were saved in her web browser, so it was easy for him to login to these and use her bank billpay to pay off things and basically make her disappear. Since it was the last day of school when she had her surgery (~10 months had elapsed from when she came to town), her 1-year lease was almost up and it only took 2 months rent to pay the rest of the lease, then he paid off the hospital so they wouldn't be contacting her. Andrew then sent an email from her account telling the apartment company she wouldn't be renewing the lease, and he hired a moving company via email to move her stuff into storage. As for #3-6: Her breasts are so sensitive that once squeezed, she pretty much becomes a bimbo until she orgasms. If she starts telling Andrew that she will get revenge on him (bite him, sue him, etc), all he has to do is squeeze her breasts and she will forget all about that. She's already in some ways liking her situation ("My! That was fantastic..."), so it wouldn't be impossible for him to keep her distracted by sex until she loses the will to hate and sue him.
StoryTeller07over 3 years agoAuthorThe boy's father arrives home and she appeals to him for help. All her savings have been spent on the surgery and closing the apartment lease. He offers her a job to earn enough to pay for further surgery, reversing what had been done to her. Working in pornography films isn't what a teacher dreams of, but she can't refuse. What else can she do? Becoming famous and applauded for the realism of her acting, she begins to enjoy the attention, fame, and even the sex. The male or female partner in the film only has to squeeze her breasts at the right moment, and she is hot, needing sex, so it is real. Given better budget films she becomes an accomplished actress, taken seriously despite her early career. When visiting her director's home, she thanks the boy by spending a passionate night with him.
Anonymousover 3 years agoEnquiring minds want to know. What's next? v
