EPILOGUE
Dianne called the police to file a missing persons report. The investigating officer said security cameras in the parking lot showed she got in a van of her own free will. About a month later Dianne received an e-mail saying she had moved to New York and asked her to ship all of her clothes. We were only too happy to get our guest bedroom back. I never asked Dianne what she told Patti but we never heard from her again.
It turns out Bobby couldn't bring himself to torch the car. It was 'found' while we were in Hawaii, in mint condition less the ignition, which was torn out to because this was, after all, a stolen car.
Richard John Connelly II was born exactly nine months after our life began anew.
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Who's Responsible!
I firmly believe that everyone is responsible for their own actions. This author seems to like to place the blame on everybody else but the person doing it. This woman had a friend that she knew was a cheat and a slut yet she allowed her to take her to a seedy bar dressed like a whore, and then proceeded to drink like a fish and go out back with the band and smoke some weed. What did she think was going to happen? She, herself, made those choices and is responsible for her own actions. She could have said 'No' at any time during the night. She and the author must believe in the All-American excuse that "it's not my fault". What if this husband had not been proactive? She is responsible for all her actions and therefore not a good choice for reconciliation. Thank you for the story.more...
What a stupid bitch to go out with her friend to that type of place when she knew that her friend was a whore.
I know it is just a story BUT, what a fool. She is lucky she survived, if not for her husband getting her watched and protected she would probably have never survived the night and for sure not the marriage. How many women are fools like this? Great story, author. Fuck the cucks and the women who make them that way.more...
Theme to Your Stories
The theme to your stories seems to be that of the wife that is willing to lie to her husband and almost cheat. Only due to the husbands vigilance is the tragic end averted. I have a problem with this. You see, there are only two types of relationships: cooperative and competitive relationships. There are only two things that matter in this world as far as any life form is concerned: survival and procreation. Marriage is supposed to be a cooperative relationship for the purposes of improving the chances of survival of both members of the relationship. It also serves the purpose of creating a stable environment for procreation and the lengthy process of human child rearing. Once a marriage relationship goes from cooperative to competitive - the marriage is over. Legally it may still exist, but in the sense of it as a cooperative relationship for the betterment of both parties involved - it has ended. Now, it has become a very dangerous situation. Instead of ensuring survival, it is actually threatening the survival of the offended party. It is clearly a bad idea for the offended party to remain married in legal terms. While some may chose to stay married for the purposes of completing child rearing those that do not yet have children are foolish for staying in a dangerous situation. To many lies have been told for her behavior not to be characteristic of her personality. She is out for herself. She does not care about the well being of her husband. She must go.more...
Funny (Inadvertently)
Of course. The husband with ESP is concerned about his wife's honesty so he launches a private sector NSA investigation of her.
That's not paranoid psychosis. Not at all.
Some people shouldn't ever be married. Or have pets. One imagines paper training with a bullwhip.
Control freak doesn't even begin to cover it: the wife will get raped if she doesn't stick to going to places her husband thinks aren't frequented by "whores"? And only his creepy hired professional stalkers can save her?
This is the "Plan 9 from Outer Space" of LW stories.more...
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