Tears of the Fallen Ch. 15

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JazCullen
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Michael still didn't trust Dante one iota, but the more he thought about it, the more the other vampire's words sounded logical. Backing down a bit, he nodded his head acknowledging he would consider what he'd said. "I'll think about it," he answered, the words coming out reluctantly.

"You do that," Dante sighed, feeling fairly certain he'd bought a little time or at least put some doubt into the elder vampire's mind. There was something about Michael that set warning bells ringing. He'd seen insanity many times over the long centuries he'd roamed the planet, and Michael was showing signs of being close to stepping over that edge.

If he returned from this mission, Dante would need to look a little closer at Michael and decide whether or not he needed to be removed permanently. Things were far too unstable already without insanity being thrown into the mix.

To be continued...

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Re-reading all the series after so many years and it's just as good, absolutely love it. One small thing that is such a pet peeve. I understand Pietro has Latin roots but his nickname "NiƱa" is so incredibly creepy... It does translate as 'little girl' but that is never a term to be used romantically. It's makes my eye twitch every time I read it and freaks me out, super gross. If you choose to publish, would you consider changing it to something like "my Reina" which means my queen for how you describe cass to be graceful and beautiful? This is definitely appropriate and used in Spanish romantically. Just a thought other than that, amazing world you've created Jazz.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Crawler cracks me up, bitching about how awful they think the story is... on chapter 15. Why the hell did you bother reading all the way to chapter 15 if you dislike it so much? That's quite the time commitment and fucking ridiculous. Also, how is the Liam/Reasa storyline anything close to rape? So far they've shared a single kiss. I can't roll my eyes hard enough. Aside from being a dick and harassing the author, thanks for the entertainment, Crawler.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lit-erotica...

Crawler - if you want to read straight fiction...go somewhere else.

Just because Jaz's writings aren't your cup of tea doesn't mean others might not like it.

crawler101crawler101almost 7 years ago
oh

and the whole theresa liam thing is bordering on rape

crawler101crawler101almost 7 years ago
where is the story?

i hope Pietro kills theresa, would finaly get som story that way.

your 'love' scenes are way to long and nothing but corny shit. this story started out way better than what it is right now.

i expect it to become worse though.

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