Ten Years

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sdwpthwlkr
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Looking down at her with a mischievous grin, he reached up one hand to his mouth and licked the thumb before sliding it between their bodies and using it to cover her clit. He started to stroke back and forth once more, teasing and manipulating her button at the same time. Within seconds, he had her at the edge again, and without a second thought, drove her right over. The orgasm crashed into her gloriously and she moaned in delight as he pushed her over the brink time and time again. Finally, he took his thumb away and let his upper body drop again until he was pressed against hers. He reached out and took one breast in his hand, his mouth covering the nipple. He flicked it back and forth until she was squirming under him.

With a subtle shift of her body, she dropped her legs from around his waist and placed her feet flat on the bed. Sliding her hands around to the front of his shoulders, she pushed him over, rolling with him until she was straddling him. He looked up at her with wondering eyes and reached up with both hands to cover her breasts. She began to rock her hips back and forth, enjoying the twin feelings of him sliding in and out of her, and the pressure on her clit. She tried to go slowly as as he did, but soon found herself speeding up faster and faster. She splayed her hands over his chest to give herself more leverage and moved even faster. Looking down at his face, she could tell his breath was coming in short gasps and he was as close as she was. This only increased her determination and she squeezed down with her inner muscles. He almost sat up and, with a muttered oath, erupted inside of her.

That was all the it took, and her own orgasm took over, exploding like a rocket throughout her body. She felt every twitch of his muscle inside of her, his sperm spurting into her, and it made her orgasm even more intense. Wave after wave pulsed through her and she rode it from crest to crest until she was completely spent. After what seemed like forever, she collapsed onto him, exhausted. After a moment, she slid off him to the side and snuggled close into him, her head on his chest and his arms cradled around her. She could only think one thought before she drifted off in contentment.

"Well, that was certainly worth the wait."

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
too short

Sweet, tender, well-written, this marvelous romance story's only real flaw is its brevity.

YgraineYgraineabout 11 years ago
Nice idea

I'm wondering who you think your audience might be -men or women? Your premis shows merit, but the story really doesn't hang together. You've written it as a fantasy coming true, yet you could have done so much more with it. A 13 year old's dream of being loved by her piano teacher (minimum age 23) would be very different from the reality of a young woman meeting up with him ten years after he finished teaching her (presumably at age 18, but you don't make it clear), so she's 28 and he's now 38?. I know it's just a story and I really hope your friend liked it. I'm both a piano teacher and a pedant, as well as a writer, so I like stories to have at least a semblance of reality. I'm afraid my "suspension of disbelief" came crashing down very early on, mainly because you told me too much and didn't make it real by showing me.

YgraineYgraineabout 11 years ago
Nice idea

I'm wondering who you think your audience might be -men or women? Your premis shows merit, but the story really doesn't hang together. You've written it as a fantasy coming true, yet you could have done so much more with it. A 13 year old's dream of being loved by her piano teacher (minimum age 23) would be very different from the reality of a young woman meeting up with him ten years after he finished teaching her (presumably at age 18, but you don't make it clear), so she's 28 and he's now 38?. I know it's just a story and I really hope your friend liked it. I'm both a piano teacher and a pedant, as well as a writer, so I like stories to have at least a semblance of reality. I'm afraid my "suspension of disbelief" came crashing down very early on, mainly because you told me too much and didn't make it real by showing me.

TooCleverByHalfTooCleverByHalfabout 11 years ago
Good points, bad points

Good characters, decent pacing.

Not enough story to really be a good Romance, try Erotic Couplings for further stories of this style.

The paragraphs were huge for an Internet format. Consider shorter ones (about five lines, usually less) in the future. My eyes skipped lines or repeated them, killing the narrative momentum every time.

You've got potential- now get an experienced editor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Erotic Couplings, not Romance.

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