Terror in the Snowstorm Ch. 01

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"Zeke," she said, "you're going to die here. Shooting is too good for you, so I'm going to prepare you for the fires of Hell you'll spend eternity in. Seth, get the Jeep started. The floor slopes a little toward the fireplace and I want to make sure the fuel is flowing in the right direction."

Stunned, I opened the door and went to the Jeep. It started right up. I was glad to see that it had almost a full tank of gas. I looked back to see Tara walking out the door and closing it behind her. As she opened the door to the Jeep, I could here Zeke bellowing with rage and fear. Suddenly his voice changed to screams as a strong light appeared in the cabin window. Tara closed the car door and said, "Drive."

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Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Good start. A little brutal but expected.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Really good! - But why was Seth so slow? He did react like a moron! 5*s.

snathsnathalmost 11 years ago
Great

Great build up with right amount of all the ingredients. Look forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
You are a fantastic writer!

I really hope you keep submitting here. Your work is truly enjoyable.

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