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"Turn around slut and bend over."
She hurried to comply, releasing his cock as he stepped back into the water, letting the warm jets wash him of soap. He semi saw her bend forward and present her ass and pussy to him, her hands rested on the shower wall. He wished then that his eyes were better, to remember this moment clearly in his mind, but as he stepped forward and teased against her pussy he no longer cared. All that mattered was that this girl would be his. His sister would be his first harem girl.
"You need your Master to fuck you don't you slut?" he growled to her as he gripped her hair and pulled back on it. Her body bowed to follow her head and she moaned loudly, a primal, needy sound.
"Yes Master yes!" she pushed back to his cock but he would not give it to her yet.
"Beg for it my sister. Beg for your brother to fuck your wet pussy."
"Please, oh fuck please," she begged and whined while she ground her hips back to the tip of his cock, desperately seeking it. "Please fuck me Master. Fuck your slut sister. I need my brother's cock so bad!"
He grinned and pulled her back harder as he thrust forward and buried his shaft into her waiting hole. It was hot and soaken wet, much hotter and wetter than Brenda had been. Chris groaned from the exquisite pleasure of being inside his sister. His mental domination of her had worked like a charm and now he was just going to enjoy it.
His new slut was a wild woman and she rammed herself wantonly back on his cock. It was not so much that he was fucking her as she was fucking him. He held onto her hair and her narrow hips and enjoyed the ride as her pussy sucked him in deep and gripped him. The sweet little hole was incredibly tight and pulled as his manhood each time she rocked her hips.
"Thats it Tina," he panted between thrusts," squeeze that cock with your pussy, milk it and make your Master cum hard" he commanded her and released her hip in favor of smacking her young ass. He hit it hard each time their hips separated and each strike elicited a low moan of pleasure from his sister.
"Master I need to cum. Please, please, please let your slut sister cum!"she begged.
"Do it slut, cum for your Master. Cum now!" as he gave the command she cried out, the sound echoing in the shower as she sprayed her juices all over his balls and thighs. Her orgasm triggered his and he came hard with her, letting out a roar of pleasure as he emptied his balls into his sister's cunt, marking and claiming it as his property. He yanked back on her hair and pulled her up even more then leaned in to kiss her hard. Their tongues played over one another as they kept rolling their hips together, his slut instinctively wanting all her brother-Master's cum. Then he stopped, he broke the kiss and gazed into her eyes, putting his will behind his words as he said, "You are mine. My sister, my slut, the first girl in my harem. You will serve me anyway I want and you will serve me well. You will not be jealous but you will be needy. You will always want to pleasure me and you will always put my needs first. You understand this my slut?"
Tina shivered as her will acquiesced to her sexy brother-Master, "Yes Master" she replied meekly.
"One more thing," he smiled and kissed her again, "Don't call me Master unless we are alone or with other's in the harem."
She smiled back," Yes my Master." Then she giggled and drew him down into another hot and wet kiss.
- COMMENTS
Taljinnalmost 9 years agoGreat work, as a whole I enjoyed it immensely. It was short though, at least these first two chapters, and if you'll permit me to offer one piece of advice as a means to the end in driving up the intensity of the story: Tell us the the thought's he's reading from his sister's mind as he's manipulating her.
Slipping the notion "I want my brother's cock" should be met with the her own thoughts wondering why she would even think such a thing. Her seduction/manipulation into lust and submission would surely be all the more erotic if we could witness her ride along the slippery slope into corruption. Meanwhile each passage over the line of what she had previously considered to be her limits concerning debauchery, deviance or humiliation can thus be magnified into something momentous for the both of them. Whereas reading this as it stands lends me to believe that this guy has no love for his sister or his mother, and in fact it's rather more like he just needs a convenient hole to get off in - which on its own is an entirely valid direction to go with a story but, I must point out, is by no means the point of a harem. There, each added member offers something unique to be cherished and possibly even guarded from those who would not appreciate their value - including perhaps, the harem member's themselves.
Maybe I'm ruining a good thing by saying all of this, and to you and my fellow readers I must apologize if i have done so. Please feel free to ignore my ramblings if they offend as I most assuredly did not intend so. Also, if nothing else, please entirely ignore the rest of the peanut gallery's whining as well (especially the cowardly anonymous naysayers) and since you've obviously got the talent necessary to do this: keep it up!
GoesGruntalmost 9 years agoOthers have commented on it already, but I just have to say I wonder what it is about Mind Control stories. If his sister had been a bitch to him his whole life or maybe it was her fantasy to be treated that way I could understand. Why does the protagonist have to turn into an abusive asshole who treats even the people he supposedly cares about like garbage just because he can "control minds"?
Power tends to corrupt, sure. People under twenty five may not have finished growing the part of their brain that considers the future, okay (go look it up if you don't already know, we're not really grown up until our mid-twenties). Growing up today means you learn about sex from the internet and get a really distorted view of reality, alright. But it still doesn't add up to the stories I've read.
Is the desire to be a jackass really that closely tied to wanting mind control? Maybe people are too scared of being an asshole to actually do it without being able to force the people around them to put up with it...
I love the idea of mind control and I don't doubt I'd abuse the power from time to time if I had it, but I wouldn't be any more (and just possibly I'd be less) of an asshole than I am now if I did have it.
Anonymousover 9 years agoabout a planet opposite earth in the same orbit, where all men are studly warriors, and all women are semi-naked slaves, sex-objects and commercial fodder; usually read by twerpy 17 year-olds with bad skin, no friends, and a headstone with "Returned Unopened" already carved on it. Using other authors' metaphors and milieu are both cumbersome and irritating if no-one knows what the fuck you're talking about, write for the audience here, not your world of warcraft teenage buddies. And as for all the 'slut' verbal abuse, it's about what I'd expect from a juvenile, which is what this author most likely is.
AmorousFuckerover 9 years agoNot a fan of the peanut gallery comments. I don't quite understand the references to Gor, myself, but I would imagine it is a plot device meant for later on in the story (but then, I suppose readers of exotic fiction aren't used to plot devices that distract them even a little from the incredibly hot action.
And being upset about incest becoming a part of it? Come on now, it's only human nature that one with such power would, at the very least, want to experiment.
As for the conflicting nature of the thoughts, loving but still harsh...that only makes sense. He didn't want to do anything that would significantly alter his sister, such as making her his unwilling slave, but seeing as she already wanted dominance, letting her fall into the role she did was only natural.
I know there are two more chapters to go already, and maybe the story has found it's conclusion, but I'd love to see the mother and sister become queens of the harem, so to speak...not so much that they are better than the others, but they mean the most to him (along with perhaps a soul mate type).
Hell, it wouldn't be such a bad thing to throw in a guy or two who also love to be subservient to use as willing cuckold husbands to dominant women who need control (likely of other women as well), but who also have a need to be controlled by a superior male. The cuckold husband(s) could be bisexual, even if only with one another if the main character is averse to men sucking his cock. I do still like the idea of them being subservient to him, as well, though, and really more for the domination factor than bisexuality. This hero doesn't come off as being the least bit into guys, but power does corrupt, and that's a plausible way for it to corrupt without becoming evil at the same time.
Blah blah...now I'm trying to tell you how to write your own story.
In any case, I've rated both of these 5 stars, and such ratings do not come easily from me. Kudos.
