The End.
Epilogue: Seven years later their partnership had been going on but struggling at times. After they installed their National Merit son into a college dorm and were driving home, Doug said to his significant other, "A certain lady and I have a mutual interest in each other but she has made it clear to me that she has no interest in a future relationship because of my present domestic situation. Would you consider moving on? I would offer you a settlement fee so that you wouldn't be in the poor house."
Panic exploded in her head again, but she responded with a lie, "That works out because Harrison Deerfield - remember that name? - still looks at me like a hungry puppy on his monthly sales calls to the CM, and I am sure he wants me as much now as he did 6 years ago. The CM says that he is now the single proprietor of his Manufacturers Rep agency. I will move by the end of the month, Doug. I'll never stop thanking and loving and admiring you, but I know now that our relationship can not completely recover. Much happiness to you and whoever you couple with in the future."
After Jeannette moved out she looked up her once upon a time, best friend, Bill Walker. She found him at an VA assisted living facility in a roll around lounge chair after having suffered a stroke. She sat beside him and they chatted about life since she had seen him. She concluded, "I just moved my son into a college dorm and moved out of my house at my ex-husband's request and I plan to re-attract the the man I was riding in that Hartford hotel room when Doug came in and caught us in the act - if you can recall that incident."
Obviously no longer impressed with her he still held her hand and said, "I am sure you will find some happiness with whomever you pair up with in the future. Thanks for being my friend. I really appreciate your looking me up and coming by."
Jeannette walked to her car quite certain that she didn't have a friend in the world! But she also knew that she could give herself a cosmetic makeover and she could easily find a gentleman to help her survive for the next short period of time.
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A mish mash of words, sentences and paragraphs. No real story line, let alone a plot to this.
wish you
had died in 9/11 your plots suck, no real emotions , and you write like a feminist whore...
Shallow (as usual)
Apparently this author has had little life experiences because the author writes shallow wandering tales. Interesting that the author is also shallow in the bio for the author (plus no scoring indicates a fatal lack of confidence).more...
Poor writing, but smart ending.
Instead of going nuclear he came out ahead or as ahead more than most in this situation. He used her fresh guilt to get favorable divorce terms instead of getting screw d by the system. He downgraded her from wife to fuck buddy, and even had her pay rent. He had live in pussy that was paying, looking after his son, and he was legally free of her. After the kid goes to college he dumps her and starts up with another women. Ahhh, he won!more...
seriously bad
A retired USMC Gunnery Sergeant:
Talking about a man he barely knows and he insults him as a redneck for no apparent reason.
A male model and an engineer? Hardly an uncultured uneducated bumpkin.
Is supportive of a multiple cheater?
The USMC motto translates from Latin as 'Always Faithful', a Gunnery Sergeant is the Marine's Marine, hard to imagine anyone less sympathetic to unfaithful people.
Doing a 'show-and-tell' about his medals and how he got them?
Clearly not only a non-native English speaker/writer but also ignorant about even the basics of the US.more...
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