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Soon, the front yard was filled with the music of the angels' ecstasy.
Rebecca grabbed Jie Er's hands and pulled her down on herself, their breasts cushioning her fall. She wrapped her hands around the blonde angel's torso, while Jie Er's legs straddled her sides.
They kissed and mashed their bodies against each other, as the pleasure began to overwhelm them. In that moment, they did not want to be separated, and instead wished to meld into each other's bodies.
They also continuously switched positions: For a while, Jie Er was on top and riding, and then Rebecca was on top and pounding, before Jie Er took over control for the next position. All the while, their voices were singing freely into the open air.
However, as the heat rose beyond a certain level, their bodies could no longer hold on. Jie Er, who felt like she was about to release, waited for her partner.
Finally, she saw Rebecca's eyebrows twitch, which, by now, she knew to be a sign of her impending climax. She imprisoned the redhead's face in her hands and gazed straight into her rose-colored eyes. "I love you, Becky," she said, in just the way the redhead needed to hear it.
Rebecca responded with her body. It lurched and shivered, and sent her warmth up against the side of the gan. Jie Er kissed Rebecca on the lips, and let go, releasing her own essence, which dribbled down the gan to mix with Rebecca's, and bringing out a beautiful, rosy, strawberry scent, that permeated the garden.
Jie Er fell against Rebecca's body, and they quickly cuddled against each other, the gan still filling them.
"Another round?" Rebecca asked, after taking a few moments to catch their breaths.
But before Jie Er could reply, a VP chimed in from Rebecca's ring.
"Mother, you call at the most inappropriate times!" Rebecca complained to her VP.
"Why? What were you doing? Never mind. I can take a guess. Are you two done?" spoke Aurnia. She seemed to have a sixth sense for such things.
Jie Er and Rebecca giggled at each other.
"Are you ever going to return my gan?" Aurnia asked, grumpily.
"Not yet. Blaze has been tinkering with technology these days. I plan to ask him to build us a gan that can be heated. If he does, then this is yours," Rebecca answered.
"Why would I want that if I can have a heated one? Ask him to make me one as well. Never mind, I will ask him myself. I may have a couple of ideas of my own, which I am not going to share with you, daughter."
Thus, unknowingly, Blaze was put on course to become a strap-on craftsman. How famous his works would become? That was for time to tell.
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Author's Note: I know I said that I will reveal the easter eggs in my story, but I decided not to spoil the fun of reading the story a second time and figuring them out for yourselves. However, I will tell you the clues I left that identify Lynn as Nikolett, as they are a bit obscure (I didn't want anyone to figure it out, really).
Nikolett Lovag/Lynn Streltsy: Valinna Strom tells Jie Er and Blaze that Nikolett uses a bardiche. The name Streltsy is derived from the Streltsy division of Anjalhebo. Streltsy is a name for real-life Russian firearm infantry between the 16-18th centuries, who used to use bardiches and muskets. Thus, Nikolett also ended up using a 'musket' shot to defeat Blaze. Streltsy-Bardiche-Muskets-Nikolett.
Another clue was that General Lynn Sturm calls Nikolett a horse-rider at the meeting at Tir in Chapter 15. Lynn pretty much tells Blaze that she loves riding horses, when they share a moment after the party at Riverbridge. There were a couple of more things in their conversation, and in that chapter...
Anywho, good luck figuring out the rest :).
Q&A
Q. Can Splash fly, now?
A. No, just glide.
Q. Why doesn't Jie Er recognize Baozhai Rong?
A. Because she simply did not know her well enough. She simply saw her in the passing, 62 years ago, and Baozhai was just one of the many scholars present. However, Baozhai does recognize Jie Er. She simply chooses to not say anything about it. In fact, Baozhai was with Ying Yue and CG at the auction in Chapter 5. So, she always knew who Jie Er was.
Q. Why have you made Blaze regress again w.r.t Jie Er?
A. It has always been on the cards. Blaze had previously convinced himself that he was doing it to heal Jie Er. But now, he can't do that anymore. And, since he is slowly beginning to view her as a mother, he is only left with this option. His decision comes from a very emotional perspective, i.e you cannot look at it pure through logic.
As an author, I had to do it because of the role Jie Er will play in the future.
Q. Are Blaze and Jie Er somehow related by energy?
A. No. The only role Jie Er played in his hatching was to take the angels' energy to the node.
Q. What about Jie Er's birthday? (Pinku Lady)
A. Jie Er turned 170 on Liber 11th, LE 638. Her party was just a peaceful family dinner, with Blaze, Rebecca, Sky and Splash. She likes it that way. However, Blaze has big plans for her 180th, and her 200th birthdays.
Q. How angelic are the angels, exactly? (based on D5834's comments)
A. Do not let individual characters mislead you about the angels. Azra-El's angels may not be the epitome of angel-ness, but they are certainly more angelic than humans. But, since they are a sentient life with free will, there will be a spectrum of personalities. I'd like to believe that even someone like the Grey Mother is led by ideology and not by pure selfishness.
So, in statistical terms, the mean 'goodness' for angels, humans, and demons may fall at 75-85, 50, and 20-30, respectively- 100 being absolute good, and 0 being absolute evil. (It's just a representation, do not take it seriously.) The width of the curves is matter for more serious discussion. Haha.
Q. Are the countries of Azra-El inspired by real life? (My alter ego)
A. Most of them are! There are currently 14 nations in the HU, excluding the Fairies whose entire race currently lives in the refugee camps of Vaikunheim. I tried my best to be inclusive of the old world (i.e before Europeans started conquering new lands). Teteocan represents native Americans.
I will leave you guys to figure out which ones are which. However, keep in mind that the actions of the characters in the story do not reflect anyone or anything from the real world. What I mean is that I do not intend to show any country or people from the real world in a favorable or unfavorable light. I appreciate diversity of cultures, which is why I chose to include real life cultures.
For example, I let my patrons decide which race Arethusa would belong to. The options were Nerieds (Greek), Deas (Assyrian), Ulbahr (Arabic), In-eo (Korean). My patrons picked Nereids. Now, though I've made their culture reflect their origin, their basic premise would not have changed. They would still discriminate against the Mami-Wata, and the siren, and Arethusa's character would still be fighting the same fight.
Aranya was initially based on India and its surrounding countries, and I essentially picked it on a whim as I happened to be there at that time. However, the country has now kinda turned into modern day America as far as racial diversity is concerned. The Marigolds are English, Rebecca is Irish, Aahna is Indian, Rachel is Welsh, Bi is Vietnamese, Kida is Japanese, Lin and Rin are Mongolian or Tibetan (upto the reader), Claudis is Nordic, Seshat is Egyptian, and so on... The same can be said for other nations. They may share physical culture/names but that is where the similarities end.
Adventures of Capricious Dragon
Phil: Goddess, dammit! Why do we have to write his damn prologue, while he naps for who knows how long?
Betty: He's the boss, Philly. We must do his bidding. Look at it this way- at least, he is not awake to play with us.
Capricious Dragon's sleeping body and the two stars orbiting around him pass through a nebula, and Phil starts frantically devouring as much of the cloud as his red-giant's body can envelop.
Betty: Phil, you should stop stress-eating. Who knows what it may do to you?
Phil: I am not stress-eating! I am trying to get bigger. Maybe one day, I can overcome this darned dragon!
Betty: Sigh...
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Response to Comments
SpiritofEuphoria: I am eager to write about Blaze's dark side too, but it will have to wait for a while. There are a couple of conditions for it to come out, which I've intentionally not revealed, at least not directly. As for 'pounding' Hela, that won't be happening at least in that sense. Why? I will leave that for you to guess. :P.
jpz007ahren: You are as insightful as ever! Before I go into your response, I must ask you. Would you be interested in being a beta reader? Maybe give me your thoughts before I post my chapters online? The only clause is that you would have to read my chapter in a short timeline. The perk will be that you will get to read my chapters a week or so earlier than anyone on Lit. Don't feel pressured to accept. It is your choice. Anywho, on to the response.
I am glad to have evoked such strong feelings with this chapter - it was truly my masterpiece, and I spent a lot of time and thought, both writing it and building up to it. Thank you for reading, and thank you for your continuous support!
Sky: Blaze may be the first FAQR on Azra-El, but he may not be the one who leads Sky into battle. *wink*. But yes, Sky will be raised and trained by Blaze, mostly.
Fengguan/Fenghuang - that was exactly why I chose those names. I am glad you caught it or at least intuited it. :). World Energy vs third party intervention- I will leave that question unanswered, for now.
Jekyll: I haven't watched it, but I am not surprised something from that show resonates with Blaze.
Diversity of species: I am eager to explore more species as we head into the demon lands. If just the mermaids could have so much diversity, think about the rest! Nirn: Yes, they are organs in a way, I suppose.
Eminem: Ay! I really enjoyed choreographing that fight. I didn't even know I had that skill :P. I hope you listened to those songs while reading. I was, while writing.
"People he has inspired rather than putting all the responsibility on him and him alone" - you've once again foretold what was going to happen. I've been planning Arethusa for a while, now.
Kindred: You are right! If she is his Kindred, he is also her Kindred. It is a two-way street. However, I must confess that I am not exactly sure of how to deal with their relationship. At least, not entirely. I am sure, however, their relationship will evolve naturally. Though, whether it will turn into a great love or eternal hatred, remains to be seen xD. It's a thin line between love and hate, trite as it may sound. But you can see in this chapter, that she does have feelings for him, though I doubt she can define them as well as he does.
I must say, I did not get that Blue-lantern reference. The movies are the only extent of my Marvel knowledge. So, in the end, it was hidden well. Unfortunately, I have my sources, and yes, this dragon always knows!
"Be well and know that you are Loved. Even if this is the only side of you I see: You are loved." - Thank you! I really cannot wish for more from my readers.
I would love to hear your thoughts on this chapter though the chapter may not compare to the previous one. But that is a given, as this is just a start to another grand adventure and tale, hopefully, greater than the previous one.
3 hours and 35 minutes of magnificence: I'd like to know how in the name of goddess did you read it in that time! I will consider it a testament to my writing skill :P.
"I will truly miss you" 2!!: Ahaha. You did cover all your bases with my relationship, and unfortunately, so did I in these few short months, but oh well, that is life. However, here is to a new start, to our love lives, to your job, to the next arc of my story, to your patronship (xD), and to many more exclamation marks. *ka-chink*. Hope you are doing well.
Ryanwood405: Here's the next arc. :)
Wafflesundae: No sir, reading a story is the best way to spend time during a quarantine. Haha. I am glad you don't think my grammar issues have continued. I know they were a problem at the start, when I was just writing for fun.
Peeping:Which scene are you talking about? Astrid or Clio? Both have been developed and resolved in the same chapters, right?
DBZ? Over 9000? Crushing eyepieces? Granted, though I need to think up a good scene for it.
Shanjoo: Thank you for being with me from the start. You guys kept me going! As for angel pregnancy, the organs related to it are mostly vestigial. Though Blaze will eventually get someone pregnant, it will be more of an exception. As for menstruation itself, humans are one of the few animals that menstruate. Why should I give my poor angels menstruation? Let them be free of it. Hope you found the reread as fun!
Anonymous (Amazing!!): Oh yes, I thought real hard over the plot twists, and made sure I built up towards them from much before, which is why they feel so natural, though they may have not registered in the conscious mind as you read. Too many plot twists do spoil the story. I was unsure of how I did, but it seems like I did great! Thank you.
QuantumTruth11: Here is more!
Digitalis08: Ahaha. Kinky porn was exactly what I had in mind when I first started out. It was supposed to be practice for another story I was writing. However, this has grown much more than that one had ever been.
I shall publish this at some point, and yes, those formats will be available to my patrons. They surely deserve them.
Reread: I am glad you found so many easter eggs. It's what makes a reread worthwhile. Also, you convinced me not to reveal them, so others could reread too xD.
Thank you for writing the character descriptions. You are mostly accurate, except for a couple of things, which I shall not spoil. I hope this chapter brings some more clarity to the characters.
D5834: We've conversed through email :).
Anonymous (The Comedy): Hey! I always welcome constructive criticism 😊, but I must disagree with you on the "Lose Yourself parody". It was never intended to be a comedy. It was meant for Blaze to use the rhythm to put himself into the berserker state. (I did change the lyrics to match Azra-El, maybe that's why you think that way?)
I find the song and its beats quite emotional and inspiring. I can only surmise that you may have misread the scene because I fail to see what part of it was comedy. The entire scene was serious. Please clarify 😊, as I may have given the wrong impression with my writing.
As for the amount of comedy, I shall try, but I honestly cannot see where I am overdoing it as I consider it a part of my style of writing and a part of Blaze's nature.
Shanikejola: Ty, xD.
Lexer747: Thank you for reading!
MasterPD: Ahaha. I am glad I am climbing that list. Time to aim for the 1st! Astrid- she is a complex character, but just between you and me, everything will work out, eventually. Ely- the problem is that she doesn't really realize what's going on, herself. It is one relationship that will take time to build and may frustrate, but it will eventually for the best. I jump the gun on too many relationships in the story, so I plan to make this one endure :P.
Anonymous (Worth the wait. Epic ending): I haven't watched Bleach in ten years. However, Blaze's dark side is unlike his, I believe. Anyway, it may only come out sparsely, but it will always be significant.
Viccui: I understand your opinion on Patreon, but currently it is the only resource available for me. However, I do plan on publishing at some point, so look forward to that :). And, yes, writers do deserve to be paid. Haha. I've put in countless hours on this work over the last year and a half. Thank you!
Theother1gater: Ahaha. You are absolutely right on all accounts. Jk. No, Blaze's second pair is not bat-like. Only difference is the color and maybe their shape, slightly. Haha, the initial chapters of the new arc may have to go back to being normal length. The finale needed 18 chapters of buildup, none of them short :P. Phil would make a very good pingpong ball, yes. Good idea!
Kvan: Thank you for that praise. It made my day. I hope at least some of my sex scenes had you hooked. It is strange, but not everyone seems to read on this website for sex. I guess they just believe the stories will be more mature? Why do you read stories over here? Blaze: Humility needs to be learned, I believe. And, pride needs to be overcome. He is a kind person, but he has his flaws, some of which he will overcome, and others he will learn to live with. Blaze and Lynn: That's not over, yet, though I will always be riding the Blaze and Elyssa ship :P. Hope you are safe and well.
Anonymous (with a lot on their mind): I am glad you think so highly of my series, though I must say that I do not write this as a purely erotic series, anymore.
Are you an Indian? I am not even human. I am a dragon from a far far galaxy, currently residing in the Andromeda galaxy. Jokes aside, I have a deep interest in culture, and I take inspiration from as many cultures and histories as I can. However, it is great that my writing makes you think that I am Indian. It means that I've done justice to the culture. I hope to do so with every culture that I write about.
I've mainly focused on Western and Asian cultures, for now, but I do have minor references to cultures all around the world. For example, the Mami Wata (Azalea's race) is based on an African lore, while the Undine are European; yet both are merangels. There are many more... If you look at the map of the continent, you will see the diversity of Azra-El. Blaze just happened to start in Aranya, due to a whim of mine, and thus I had to remain consistent with its background.
I am planning on a "legen-wait for it-dary" relationship between Elyssa and Blaze. As for Az, I am not entirely sure where it's headed, yet. There will be a mermaid scene at some point, for sure. I initially intended it for chapter 19, but it just didn't feel right in that chapter.
I've never heard of Summertime saga before, today. I looked up the mermaid girl (for research purposes). She is not quite what I imagined Azalea to be, but hey, to each to his own :P.
Anonymous (The Day the Darkness Glowed Fan Theories): Those were some interesting theories! As revealed in this chapter, you got Jie Er's taint part right. Just to clarify, the day happened 62 years before Blaze's hatching, which is why Baozhai was confused that the Nephilim was Elyssa. As for why it took so long for Blaze to pop out, that's to be explored for later. I won't confirm the rest of your theories. You will just have to wait and see. xD. Nova's temper problem, you ask? Maybe from her granny?
RanceSama: I did not think that you could write sober xD. It was quite a revelation by itself! I have multiple chapters of replies to cover, so I will start from chapter 17.
