The Bastard

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I was still hanging there; my throat was hurting very badly.

I couldn't move my arms up any more.

The room was starting to go black.

I really didn't want to die anymore. Someone might find me, if I could just draw one more brea...

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Danger09Danger09almost 12 years ago
Wow -- you really are a bastard....

Ok, so she was turned into a gutter slut-- got it.... But I don't agree with infecting her with AIDS that's so mean..... No matter how slutty she maybe she's still the mother of your kids. I get infecting the others & if they didn't end up dead most likely she still would've been fucking around-- but towards the end I felt very sorry for her. Ok I must say this: you can't catch AIDS from touching, hugging, kissing & sharing utensils. HIV/AIDS can only be passed through open sores , cuts, needle sharing, blood & bodily fluid, making your children alienate their own mother is wrong on so many levels. Her life towards the end actually had me tearing up, it sounds lonely, sad & depressing. Tattooing bio hazard fuck at your own risk was funny though... I wonder if she would do things differently? Anyways liked the story

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 12 years ago
I gave you a five for a great story...

Even though you and your proof reader missed the fact that you called Vinnie 'Larry' once toward the end. This is usually the only thing I criticize for in these stories. If not for that I would have probably made it a favorite.

cantbuymycantbuymyover 12 years ago
by the way

i gave you a five -

cantbuymycantbuymyover 12 years ago
life is a bitch and then you die

and every woman knows if her husband is a "family man".

bigguy323bigguy323about 13 years ago
It would appear from "her story" that she had NO KNOWLEDGE of her husbands position in the crime world.

I wonder if she would have done what she did had she known.

And I wonder what her lovers would have done had they known.

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