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Click here"Be safe, you two!" Karen yelled out after the two powerful women as they vanished into the forest.
Thunderfoot caught up to Tani'm not long after she entered the protection of the trees, and while they both could sense Sara nearby, neither of them could hear or tell exactly where she was.
Night had covered the forest in darkness, and what light would have been provided by the full moon was dimmed by the thin cloud cover that blanketed the sky. Tani'm's gift provided her with the sight that Sara and Thunderfoot naturally possessed, so while to a human the tall trees and uneven forest floor would have been a never ending series of surprises, to them it was clear as day.
As the three supernatural beings moved deeper into the rainforest, Tani'm could tell that the wolf was getting closer, and as they leapt and dodged their way through the brush in a silent march towards destiny, a herculean howl rose up in the distance — an unmistakable challenge from a mighty and dangerous foe.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoI am on page 2 of this chapter. Great transition from the last chapter. At First I thought I clicked on a wrong link, then Àfter I checked I was still in your story I thought I was in a flashback.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI really dislike Sara this chapter. Her sex scene was almost bullying and throwing meat in Andrew's face almost makes me hope she doesn't make it. Andrew has no agency and you're making him be a leaf floating in the wind.
PantherParabolaover 6 years agoAuthorI would say that I can see your point, but I can't. I think you're viewing events through hazy glasses, and please give me a moment to explain why.
Tani'm did break into Andrew's house, but he didn't know that. He came home to find Karen and her together, so to all appearance she was Karen's guest. He knew that her presence alone signified something had happened, given Tani'm's aversion and distrust of him. Her outburst was rude, but not screamed, and he was annoyed at her lack of consideration for his feelings or needs.
He was still trying to figure out how he felt about everything he had learned, but nothing about what she did was anything more than rude. Vivienne attempted to break into his network, a clear and blatant violation, which totally explains the difference in his reaction.
When you think of it in context, then you realize that Andrew had no idea she had broken into his house while he had been out. He can sense Karen's fondness for Tani'm through his bond, and recognizes the likelihood that at some point she will likely be joining his family.
Let me now ask, how do you think he should have handled it?
Lets say you come home from work, you had agreed to do something for a friend of your wife, and when you arrive your wife's friend is there (with your wife), and immediately asks in a cold tone: "So, when are you going to take care of X?"
After you answer that, tell me what you would have done when you were 18, because let's not forget that Andrew is only 18.
Lord_Johnnyover 6 years agoI have to admit that I was a bit disappointed with this one. We saw some character regression rather than development, when we saw Andrew talking with Tani'm. She broke into his house, and started yelling at him the moment he came through the door and he handled it with kid gloves? I mean, even Viviene was treated more forcefully (and I think appropriately), and she had a lesser issue than what Tani'm had done.
Really bugged me with the inconsistency there, and the fact that Andrew seems to be constantly lacking a backbone with anyone that doesn't have a penis. Can we stop the sexism of that? You don't have to be an ass to still have a resistance to simply being treated like a rug.
3 out of 5.
