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Click here"I was so pissed about everything you'd been doing to Sara and how you'd tried to break into my network, that I didn't really consider the hypocrisy of what I was doing... I should be better than that."
Vivienne took her refilled glass from the waitress, thanking the nice young woman and waiting until she had left before she responded, "No one's better than that, Andrew. My company's built on that undeniable aspect of human nature."
Andrew took another bite of ice cream, taking the time to savor the complex flavors that formed from the layering of ingredients. Not the best he had ever had, but somehow more compelling.
Rather than contradict her, he decided to let her point stand. Most people would never be better than what her company expected, and in that way she was right. He considered reminding her that it was their responsibility to rise above those base traits of their ancestry, or be governed by them forever, but settled on the fact that it was not his place and that was not the right time.
He took another bite of ice cream, and while it melted in his mouth, he reached down and pulled a small notepad out of their backpack, accompanied with a pen. Tearing out a single sheet, he began to write an extremely long set of characters. After filling almost half of the sheet of paper, he folded it and handed it across to Vivienne.
"The files are encrypted, and you'll need that private key to gain access."
Vivienne grew more frustrated as she accepted the piece of paper. "You make no sense, Andrew... If this drive contains everything you claim it does, that's invaluable to my company, and you're just giving me that because you feel guilty?"
Andrew finished the last of his ice cream, and rested his hand on Sara's on his leg. He could tell she was enjoying her mother's confusion, and supported what he was doing one hundred percent.
"Well, consider it a job application then. Here's the thing, after what we've been through this weekend I need to figure out what the hell I am, and what exactly I can do. Everything to this point is leading me towards a single conclusion, and if I'm right, I need something that you could give me."
Sara could sense Andrew's excitement as he built towards his request, everything he offered Vivienne pulling her towards granting him his wish.
"If you want money, I'm sure you'd more than earn it. Assuming, of course, that you aren't asking for more than your worth."
Andrew's gained the widest cheshire-cat smile, "Before I explain what I need, let me first explain why I need it in this way."
They could tell by how Vivienne had moved forward in her seat, leaning almost over the table that he had captured her interest.
"Those documents you shared with Sara led me to an unexpected truth about my life. Those discrepancies you'd found in my history were omissions of things the government didn't want discovered about me. About my intellect, and my abnormal nature. They've been watching and studying me from a distance my entire life, and the only reason I'm here is because my parents threatened to end their service.
"They gave my parents a ridiculously nice contract and stationed us here with the agreement that my parents would not be reassigned until after I graduated high school. Your daughter was not their target, and while she may be on their radar now, I don't think she was before.
"Again, for that I must apologize. Since I learned all of this, I've been extremely cautious with everything I do online, and anyone I contact or call electronically. While I'm certain — for reasons you know — that none of my devices have been bugged or hacked, I cannot be so certain about gateways further downstream."
Sensing a pause in Andrew's explanation, Vivienne sat back and took a sip from her wine. Andrew and Sara drank from their waters, giving her time to process everything he had said. The pieces fit together, especially after everything she had seen Andrew do.
"I still don't know who I can trust, but I refuse to believe my parents are involved."
Sara gripped his leg with more force than she meant, eliciting a sharp intake of breath from Andrew as she said, "No, sweetie. Dave and Michelle love you more than life itself. There's no way they're involved."
He leaned over and rubbed his temple across her cheek, enjoying the feeling of her hand as she cupped the side of his face and purred into his ear. They shared that moment a little longer than intended, but after sitting back into his chair Andrew continued, pulling Vivienne back across the table with the intrigue he had built.
"So, that brings me back to what I'm hoping to gain from you. They're no doubt monitoring your phones and internet, but I know you use high bit encryption through proxies, so that won't get them much unless your proxy is logging, which I'm forced to assume it doesn't.
"On that drive is another file, a map that shows a parcel of land that rests in the middle of the forest. It's nearly a hundred acres, and despite my efforts I can't figure out who owns it or what it's worth. There's no road access or anything of value anywhere near it. I want that land, and I want it bad.
"We have quite a bit of money between the two of us," Andrew stated, gripping Sara's hand in his lap. "But unfortunately that doesn't help us. Whatever it costs, I'll more than earn for your company as an unpaid intern. The key thing is, we need your PI to track down the owner of that parcel, and we need to broker the sale in a way where nothing leads back to me or anyone directly affiliated with me. The government cannot know that I'm interested in that land, but when the time comes I need to be able to claim it and show ownership if challenged."
Vivienne's confusion was palpable as she looked between the two teens who sat before her.
"What's there?"
Andrew and Sara shared a profound and intimate moment, their eyes speaking the world as their grip intensified.
"Everything."
With only three (3) installments to go and so many loose ends in this story, I can only conclude that the author has not finished it. With the last installment published over 18 months ago, moreover, I can only conclude that the author either will not finish it or cannot finish it. Either way, it is clear that he cares little for his readers, the consumers of his work. In this way, he joins countless other authors on this site who shows so much contempt for their readers. One such author (cjmccormick, author of The Fourth Vector) shared with publication of the 20th installment of his work that he planned to write 30 or more additional installments of his work. I should live that long!! As before, I encourage readers to switch to another site (wolfpub dot org) where they can find completed works highlighted and searchable. Never again will the reader be frustrated to find the work they had been reading was not or never would be finished!
I totally understand the difficulty in knowing how much time has passed. Events are so tightly packed together, which is only confused by how the narration jumps between groups. Everything culminates in a kind of shifted perspective on what is happening chronologically. Then you add in The Glade, and the time dilation that happens there, which confuses things even more.
So, here is what has happened. Andrew arrived in the PNW about a month before school started, and two weeks of school has passed. Andrew has only really been learning about his powers for two weeks, ever since Sara and him came together. There is a reason that his gifts have awakened so slowly, and why they seem to be coming to life so much faster now.
The tricky part is, and this is a complete guess on my part, but for Andrew and Karen particularly, they have experienced around a week of extra time within The Glade. Karen spent three days in the glade with Tani'm, nursing Andrew back to health after the Glamour ward almost killed him during the Mercedes attack.
Sara and Andrew have spent a few half days in the Glade, playing around and doing "other things". When I revealed what Andrew had turned The Glade into, I worked hard to impress upon the readers the significance of that moment, because it is an incredible tool, and by far the most important thing available to them right now.
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My life has conspired yet again to slow down the latest chapter, but I'm making great progress. For those that do not check my Patreon, I had to put my cat to sleep last week. It was devastating and forced me to step away from the story for over a week.
With where I was emotionally, anything I wrote would have been melancholy and marose. Not what I wanted the next chapter to be, or the influence I wanted to carry into the world I have been creating. Now that I have a bit more perspective, and have internalized the grief, I can focus more on the life I shared with her for the last 17 years. With that emotional vantage point, I was able to finish the next section of chapter 19, which is in the hands of one of my editors, and will be posted to Patreon soon.
The next section covers the full Monday at school for Andrew and their crew of friends. A bit more with Dr Blake, some of the impacts of what Andrew has been doing to Karen, and the activation of Andrew's art project. A lot of good things, and like usual a gradual progression towards the growth of our characters and the further revelation of what is happening to them.
Anyways, that's all I have to report right now. Hope you are all doing well and are having a wonderful life, wherever you are!
Right, I have had enough. I want back every penny that I have spent on getting to read your excellent story. How dare you have a life or other things to do other than keep me enthralled? Every penny mind.
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I hope you sell this as a complete book when you are finished. It’s hands down the best story that I’ve ever read here. The only thing that trips me up a bit is the progression of time but that may just be part of reading a story one chapter at a time which are spaced 5-8 weeks apart. BTW, how much time has passed since the start of the story?
I think your writing has improved dramatically and I'm glad you are still finding time to work on the story. Your dialogue in particular has improved. Just keeping plugging along when you can, writing regularly is the only way to improve.