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Thank you for staying with me, and I'm sorry for any delays during the writing. Love you all, --Cruel*
- COMMENTS
poreyb1999about 7 years agoI loved the story it started out happy then got sad then just us I was about to cry it was so sad they got there sort-of happy ending
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThe best endings bear the seeds of new beginnings. What an amazing awesome fairytale! This is hands down my favorite of your stories despite the short simplicity. It gave me the same thrill as any Louis L'Amour's or Frederick Faust melding of medieval survivor with otherworld feel.
Brilliant, loved it!
Cztelnik
PepperSaltover 10 years agoThe most beautiful story ever, tears.
with some kingdom hearts birth by sleep. oh my god.. ohhh thats was amazing ;o
TimothyMover 11 years agoNo need to apologize for the ending of this story, it was not nearly as bad as I thought it would be - positively HEA for you ;-).
And I had no problem working out that Shia died due to Merlee law, and that Adriel just knew this would be the case. Quite clear and served her right !
But I almost admire you most for making us understand how the villagers could act like they did (from genuine fear and hurt), while still having us hate the way the two lovers were treated.
