- Romance
- The Boy Next Door
- Page 2
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As I feel his hands slide off me, he begins to press himself deeper into me, and I know he is nearing ejaculation. His kiss stops, and I allow the vibrator to slip out, and my orgasm to start. I feel the first convulsion of his release as my own orgasm fills my senses. As my awareness returns, I can tell that his now empty member is still inside me, letting every last drop out.
He slowly slides off me, and pulls me into his side. His hug conveys how completely drained he feels, and perfectly matches my blissful mood. I lie there contentedly, until I am afraid I will fall asleep. As I begin to stir, I hear one word.
"Stay." Not quite a command, but definitely not a question either. Not trusting my voice as the sudden rush of happiness pushes me close to tears, I nod my head against his chest. "Good," he replies. I feel a gentle kiss on the top of my head. "Be right back," he says, as he gently slides me off of himself and onto a pillow. I hear him cross the hall to the bathroom. As the door clicks shut, I drift off into sleep.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoNice story, until the power play in bed. Especially for someone coming out of an abusive relationship, this should be a real turn-off. The inconsistent verb tenses were also distracting.
hot zoneover 18 years agoGood basic story, love the emotions. However you do need to make sure you profread before submitting. Make sure you keep your story in the same person; in some places it's in first person, in some places it's in second person. Overall, keep up the good work. And yeah, the ass thing is not my cup of tea either, but you can't please everyone! So keep writing, I look forward to your next story!
Anonymousover 18 years ago... to see you continue a series of "The Boy Next Door". For us to grow with your characters as well as help cultivate your writing skills would be marvelous. Looking forward to reading more =)
don87654over 18 years agoYou are writing about "the boy next door"? And when he sees you at the party you could feel "her" hairs stand up" on "her" arms? Are you writing about "the boy next door" or his sister?
Do you believe in proof-reading your story before you submit it? When I got to that, it totally turned me off....obviously you are a wannabe "stud writer" that is letting your dick dictate as to what you are writing as you dream, or you are plagarizing another story and changing the characters, or both?
Anonymousover 18 years agokind of an abrupt ending. this story could have been so much better witha longer build-up and a better ending. Still better than most of the romance stories on Lit.
