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"Okay Dad," Elaine said.
Elaine breathed a sigh of thanks as she saw Highway 52 just ahead. The gang members' car had crept up even closer, menacing.
She cursed under her breath; there was a pickup truck heading south on Highway 27; she was going to cut it very close.
"Aw, mother fucker, huh?" Jose yelled as Elaine successfully swerved onto Highway 52, giving them no time to react.
Nadia leaned on the horn, blaring her displeasure at Elaine. She continued down Highway 27, cursing under her breath at 'stupid women drivers.'
"And just yakking away on her stupid cell phone, not a care in the world!" Nadia ranted.
"Fucking bitch!" Angel yelled at Jose, slapping him on the side of the head. "Some old woman drive better than you, huh? Huh? Get out; let me drive, stupid fucking bitch."
"I think I lost them," Elaine breathed a sigh of relief.
"I'm right in front of you," Dick said and blinked his high beams at her.
"Thanks, Dad," Elaine smiled as Dick drove past her toward Highway 27.
"Any time, Sweetie," Dick said and hung up.
"That's what Dads do," he said and hit the lights and siren when he spotted the Angels 270 gang members' car.
**Author's Note: 'The Broussard Sisters' twelfth installment is soon to follow; I am intending on completing this series, as well as the 'Dee & The Twins' series and it ran a bit long.
***Author's Note: I write these stories for my pleasure; I post them here for your enjoyment.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoYou had a good story going and then you turned into a gang member and destroyed any decency the story had . I don't understand and im done ! You blew it !!!
SlithyToveabout 2 years agoI have really enjoyed this series to this point, but this particular one seems like it's lost the thread a little bit, with the focus on a bunch of new characters and plot lines. I trust the author to tie it up well, considering his overall writing ability, but this one was much tougher to get through than the previous installments.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoDon't remember what page Im on here, but what the fuck is Paul's problem again? Why is he boozing like a retarded monkey, totally out of character for him? ...and why are Candy's parents, now that she's dead, so worried about pregnant Cindy? (I got that right, didn't I?). ...i mean really, did any of the parents doubt for one freaking second that he wasn't fucking ALL THREE GIRLS THE WHOLE TIME? I mean,you don't date all three, take them all on the honeymoon and then live with them all cause the conversation is good, yeesh!
I really liked the story in the beginning but there are so many people in it now that its really confusing, that and the fact that there isn't any enjoyment in reading really since everyones lives are so fucking depressing :(. When the main nexus of characters lives and story goes to shit, well it kind of wrecks the whole train for me :(
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoUgh.... To be honest I'm actually on page four, haven't gotten very far in this chapter... And I've skimmed a LOT in this chapter. There are just so damned many new characters that I just can't fucking keep up... And you know what? Honestly since Candy (and celine to some degree) was killed off, I've just gotten pissed off and become disinterested. ...I mean, one of the four main characters that we've grown to love and expected to see to the end, just fucking randomly killed off? I'm fucking pissed... Almost as pissed as when that fucking retard Paul didn't MARRY ALL THREE of the girls!! I mean, fucking really?! He's been dating and fucking them all for years, in love with them all, and he only wants to marry one? It's totally out of fucking character for him!! ...yeah two of them would just be ceremonies, but who cares.??!
...it's going to be hard to push through the story, if I even can :(
