I fell asleep almost instantly, after that. I awoke some hours later, to the obvious sounds and noises coming from Frank's room. I fell asleep listening to Frank pounding my wife, and her moans of pleasure drifting through the wall. My wife obviously returned some hours later, as she was there when I awoke. My wife was asleep beside me, I gently pulled the covers back hoping to see her abused pussy, however she had obviously cleaned up before sneaking back to our bed. When I returned from meetings midday, she asked if I had been angry at her being late back, explaining some of the other ladies had invited her out to a club and it had been almost five am before she got back in. I just smiled kissed her and said not a problem, she could go out anytime she wanted. Anne asked if that included while she was at home, I said of course my dear.....after all, I knew why didn't I!
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Pathetic!
Just another sissy wimp husband and a heartless, hateful cunt wife. this was really dry and boring! No loving wife here.
Close, but no cigar!
Concur with other commenters that there was a lack of transition from her saying Frank was a lout to getting porked by him! We the Readers (WtR) can kinda fill in the blanks ... Sweetie WAS intrigued by Frank's confidence in overtly chasing her in the presence of her Hubby the night before, and she just agreed with Hubby pro forma. Maybe Frank skipped a few sessions and showed her he was an avid suitor ... perhaps with some visual or tactile evidence of his potential. BUT the Hubby-narrator PoV keeps those aspects hidden from WtR. Perhaps her saying (so Narrator could hear it on the balcony) "Frank, I'm so glad you called my room and asked me to lunch. I love it when a man is willing to boldly go after what he plans to get. I'll bet you arranged for lunch by the pool so you could show-off in your Speedos, didn't you? I thought you were just bragging last night at the bar, but at lunch I realized that it isn't bragging if it's true!"
Something like that would have bridged her earlier negative statement and her compromising presence in Frank's room. It coulda replaced one of the several dozen "Fuck me harder with your big cock!" comments Sweetie was overheard uttering!more...
Standard fare
I have read this same story (by different authors) at least two dozen times -- probably more. The plot is always the same: a devoted wife who inexplicably cheats, a lover with a huge cock, a husband who gets off on her cheating and somehow watches and listens to all of the action from a hidden position, etc., etc..
I understand the fantasy. I understand writing about this fantasy. What I don't understand is writing a story that has already been written a hundred times before. If you're going to write in this genre, at least make an effort to add a unique dimension to it.more...
Nice start
This could be a nice start to a cuckold series, I hope you build on it. I always hate critics who read a diss a cuckold story when the first sentence says if you dont like cuckold stories dont read.
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