The Cabin

....another rape story, dressed up as something else, placed in the incest section. I don't like rape and don't particlarlly care to read about it, so don't typically expect to find it here. If its in an incest story it dominates the story and the fact that there is incest in the story becomes inconsequential.
While I appreciate the fact that there wasn't any violence to speak of and that she 'enjoyed' it (and that it was well written), it is what it is. Would be great if you would switch it to the apropriate catagory.more...

0star

Rapist should just be butchered, men or women.

Just read the comment and response about the supposed similarity to a story of mine

And yes, there is a vague similarity, but only certain elements in the set-up; otherwise, they're only very casually similar, and I don't think there's anything to connect the two stories at all, so I'd just let it go; poster below is right, there are only so many stories to tell, and only so many ways to tell them; there are some seriously pissed-of and angry people posting comments these days, and why is that you may ask? Search me. As far as I can surmise, it all depends on which direction the hamster in their head decides to run it's treadmill when they get up in the morning. Keep going, and ignore Mr. Angry, I do.more...

Why post anonymously?

It's pretty simple. If you use your username while criticizing a story, you are likely to get assholes ripping your stories down, just because they are assholes.

I never read the story the previous commenter alluded to. You are right, there are a limited number of scenarios in which sex becomes the centerpiece. The limit is somewhere around 6 billion. Even so, yes, there are lots of stories that have similar circumstances.

Why this story didn't work for me. I hate rape stories, and this is primarily a rape story. In fact, after the attack began, I just went to the end of the story to see who the rapists were, and how incest supposedly fit in.

Everyone has different fetishes. Rarely do they cross lines a lot. For me, rape is never, never, never acceptable, even in a fantasy life. I could accept mutually desired incest as a fantastic possibility. Rape is never mutual. It is violent and wicked to my poor little mind. Therefore I cannot and will not read rape stories, looking for pleasure. It angers me when writers put rape stories in any other category.

Incest becomes "interesting" when the forbidden nature of incest is an obvious part of the story from the get-go. We know that Mother/Son, Father/Daughter, Brother/Sister couplings are illicit. Although the personal angst of one or both members of the pair can illustrate and emphasize the forbiddenness of incest, it isn't necessary, because we know this stuff shouldn't be happening. That angst may heighten the tension of the story and situation and from a dramatic standpoint, that's great.

To briefly mention that the rapists from next door are brother and sister after the fact completely eliminates that tension of forbiddenness. It's more like the brief depression after the orgasm is done. No one really cares.

Honestly, this story might have made it for rape-fetishists if it had just been the couple next door, and the story had been put in the proper category.

In this category, it rates one star.

Yes, I'm posting anonymously, because I don't want jackass ratings or comments on my stories.more...

Quick Judgment

To the Anonymous commenter who makes the veiled accusation of plagiarism, you are very quick to judge from the safety of anonymity, aren't you? I have never heard of the author whom you reference nor have I read the cited story. I will go check it out now, though, because I totally agree that this is not my best work. I'd love to see someone treat the idea with a more skilled hand. My deepest apologies for not crafting a tale to your personal standards, but my advice would be to curb your impulse to level unfounded accusations when you come across a story that is similar to something else you have read. There exists a vast number of erotic stories on the internet, and just as in any field of fiction there are only so many ways to tell a story centered around sex. I'm quite sure you are going to come across many stories that you can compare to one another and point out where one author may have been inspired by another. The number of times Shakespeare's stories have been retold is countless.

I, however, would not re-write another author's story without first contacting that author, and I certainly would not wish to insult said author with an inferior version of his or her story. Any similarities in my fiction to that of another author is entirely coincidental or unintended. And please, don't hide behind the Anonymous moniker if you want to insult someone.more...