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Click hereA stunned kind of silence surrounds us. I feel him go soft inside me and am surprised at how I feel. Disappointment? Loss? I can't name it but I suddenly feel a little sad.
I hear him pulling up his pants and buckling himself in. Has he detached himself so quickly? His business-like response to what happened between us gives me the kick I need.
I straighten. Not bothering to put on my panties, I straighten my skirt and grab my shirt off of the floor. As unaffected as possible, I stuff my breasts into my bra and slip my shirt on easily. I feel Sean's cum sliding out of me, down my leg but I refuse to feel humiliated. He watches as I catch the little bit that has escaped on my finger tips, look at it for a second, before putting it in my mouth and swallowing casually. His eyes darken.
"Well," I say softly. "I quit." I leave, not sure if I won this challenge or not.
- COMMENTS
lady_luck1over 8 years agoAuthorThanks for your input! I have been toying with ideas for a Part 2. I appreciate your insight, Maddie... Stay tuned!
Anonymousover 8 years agoInteresting. I think Sean’s response to her teasing was spot on. I think I would have added a line at the end with Sean’s chuckle saying, “I don’t think so. Tomorrow dress more office appropriate, but don’t wear any panties. Be prepared to spend the lunch hour in this office.” Then added … to be continued.
Then you could write a second chapter as they work themselves into an office relationship. The way he turned the tables on her it could become a sub/Dom story. Of course, you could always do a second chapter either way, with my comment or one of your own at the beginning and take the story anyway you wish it to go.
Maddie
lady_luck1over 8 years agoAuthorThanks for your feedback. This is my first submission and it took a bit of courage to post. This story is not entirely fictional and I'm thinking of adding a part 2... I welcome all constructive feedback!
Anonymousover 8 years agoThat was very hot. I loved the fact that it was written from a womans perspective and is a fantasy that so many of us have.
Anonymousover 8 years agoVery well written. None of the endless background with very little the sex we want
read. Keep it up.
