Where would we be without it?
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Honesty in poetry
Honestly, I can understand the fear in dealing with someone so passionate. You become consumed in that passion, and it sweeps you away. It takes real strength and certainty of self to be able to not only withstand the storm, but to be carried away by it and survive on the other side. You spoke of being a siren, leading men astray. Men aren't lead astray. They are guided by passion. The danger comes from having another's passions be stronger then your own. that's the real danger for anyone lead "astray". That's where honesty is important. True honesty about what one wants and needs. Having the passion and dedication to see it through. Hopefully you'll understand what i'm saying. If not, I hope whoever does read this understands. A beautiful audio as per the usual, dear. Keep up the amazing work. TMmore...
Worth the wait
After teasing us for a week with this title (paired with the wrong audio) you've delivered and then some. This poetic ode to passion could easily stand on its own, but the audio version stokes the fire that is exemplified by a red-headed woman. What man (or woman) in their right mind could run away from this siren of chaos? Not I. Probably going to listen to this again, just in case I missed something; my mind definitely wandered to images of you pressed up behind me with your hand down your panties...more...
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