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Click hereDon't get me wrong. I never want a woman to do something that wasn't of her own accord. I've never asked a woman to let me cum in her mouth or to swallow. I don't like to tell a woman how I'd want her to give me head. I'd much rather have her do what she wants, the way she wants. Sometimes, like with Anita, I get far more than I could have ever asked for. Other times I get less than I would want, but at least I get a variety.
Anyway, to rate Anita on a one-to-ten scale (yes, that's very rude, I know, but I've got to catalog them somehow), I'd have to say she was a nine. If she had swallowed, she would have been a ten, no doubt about it. But it's probably just as well she didn't. It might have set a standard too high for me to appreciate any of the blow jobs I got afterward.
I love giving blowjobs and there is nothing hotter than reading a blowjob story. I can't explain how hot it makes me!
it's great, i loved it, especially because i too share the adiction to blowjobs, but there is that little something that is missing, that little something that made you give here nine out of ten.. i'd have given you 90 out of 100, but since it's not possible you'll have to be satisfied with 75
i tell you, great writing, but there was that something missing which made it not be worthy of a 100
i think it was the fact she didn't let you come in her mouth, for me too, without it, a blowjob (and by extention the story of it) cannot be perfect..
Very very hot story, Impressive debut, and for a guy, like me, who is obsessed with blowjobs and knows how to recreate each one in a story I think you are already top notch at that and will be right up there with the best if you keep par with this wook.
Probably THE best debut story I have ever read. Hope that more will follow at this level of quality.