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Click here"Not a convincing start, but I'm still listening," he quipped.
"Here's the thing: I know for a fact that I'll be a wreck when we go back. I don't know how long it'll last, but I know that my friends will ask questions when they see me upset. That's where you come in."
"Okay, now I'm scared."
"Can you pretend to have dated me? I'll tell them that we met over the summer, and-"
"Wait, you want me to do what?! I don't think I can do that. First of all, it would never work. Second of all, it's fucking crazy!"
"I know, but I really don't want to explain to my friends that I've been sleeping with a married man. I feel bad enough already without having to repeat it to everyone I know."
"But how would anyone believe us, anyway? We've never really even spoken before today. No one will buy it."
She knew he had a point, but she could also see that he was caving. "We'll just say that we were sneaky and only went on dates away from the city. We can think of the details later. Please, Eric?"
When he rubbed his face with his hands, she knew he'd given in.
"Fine, but on two conditions."
She wasn't expecting that, but she agreed, anyway. "Of course. Name your price."
"First, I want a kiss from my new ex-girlfriend."
She smirked and pulled his face down to hers in order to plant her lips against his in a fiery kiss. She even surprised herself by wrapping her legs around his waist after getting caught up in the passion of the kiss. Their tongues teased one another for a few seconds before they both reluctantly pulled apart.
"Kiss, check! What's number two?"
He waited a few moments to let his breathing get back to normal after their heated lip lock.
"When all of this blows over, you have to let me take you out on a real date." That wasn't one of his original conditions, but he quickly changed his mind after the kiss. He couldn't help it. He knew he wanted to be able kiss her again, even if it meant having to wait months for him to be able to do so.
"Okay," she agreed happily, "you've got a deal. Thank you so much!"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoLike someone said, and editor might help you work out the kinks, but please keep writing! Looking forward to more from you!
ricksouzaalmost 13 years agoStarting is a good thing. It takes courage to post a first submission. And asking for comments is an even better thing and takes even more courage. I found the writing stilted and flat. The girl sounds like she's around 13 years old. Choosing Rick as the man's name got my interest. My name is Rick. I wondered, though, how he could press his chest against her back and kiss her on the forehead! An editor could help with your dialog and punctuation, but at least you can spell and construct a complete sentence and know the difference between there and their and they're! Keep writing! I've got a feeling you're not done with Rick!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI don't know why anyone would care, and I really don't care. What I care about is that this is a un ique and well written story that I am interested in seeing played out.
bigguy323almost 13 years agoShe's single and her asshole ex was separated. So, where is the problem?
LuckyInfernoalmost 13 years agoyou have me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. can't wait to see what happens.
