The Cupid Effect Ch. 03

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mondotoken
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"Wait here; I'll go see who it is Dex. Don't worry because I'd NEVER let ANYTHING happen to you baby." She retrieved a light housecoat from her closet and stepped out of the room as I searched for my shirt. I was grateful for the interruption because it allowed me to regain my focus and I intended on leaving when she got back. I didn't know where I was and that presented a bit of a problem because I was out of it when she brought me to her house. Tiffany St. Claire probably wasn't going to be forthcoming with her address in relation to my house so I figured we were pretty much going to be fucking for the rest of the afternoon.

"WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING HERE BITCH?!!" There was the sounds of a slight scuffle in the other room and I was nervous hoping it wasn't a boyfriend or relative. Tiffany St. Claire had been known to date only college guys and older men so I definitely didn't want any of that nonsense.

"I KNOW HE'S IN HERE CUNT; I WANNA TALK TO HIM!!" The door to the bed room burst open and Kelsey appeared with a partially nude Tiffany tugging at her arm. She tried to kiss me but her friend yanked her painfully back nearly pulling her arm out of the socket. Kelsey grabbed a handful of Tiffany's red mane giving it a vicious yank and in moments the girls were rolling on the floor in a desperate struggle.

"CUT IT OUT; FUCKING STOP IT!!" Both of the girls immediately stopped attacking one another and regarded me with desperate eyes.

...TO BE CONTINUED.

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Damn that was satisfying when he knocked Tad the fuck out in one punch, even made him lose a tooth. No one saw that coming I bet. :)

Why hasn't he came in any of these bitches yet? A bit strange.

Going downhill a bit. He needs to get a handle on thing or there's just going to be hordes of crazy bitches hounding him and fighting over him. That's not going to be pleasant to deal with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not crazy about nurse issue

Overall this a good series, but I don't like what happened with the nurse. Breaking up a marriage is NOT cool. I hope that gets fixed!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Double standard

So these girls hook up with others but want him all alone?

The story is quite angsty and they are quickly turning into crazy possessive b*tches

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
it keeps on getting even more bizarre

and that is good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Half an hour of hard work

Did you read this through? Have you thought about trying to make this good rather than just salacious? Really, you write like a teenager.

In smut, less is more and if you are going to try to make more more than you've got to be innovative with the encounters. And saving up his best friend as your ace up your sleeve isn't building any tension.

It's too bad because with a bit of foresight and WORK you could have something to be proud of.

Too bad. One star bad.

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