Sue opened her eyes after the throbbing joy stopped. The room had a faint trace of smoke that smelled like burnt plastic. She could see the smoke rising from one of the big motors of the robot. Without warning, the arm thrust deep and hard into her. The pain was horrific. At the same moment, she heard a crackle and saw a shower of sparks then the whole room went dark after a loud pop.
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RE: What Happened?
It's a complicated explanation of finding time, being distracted with other stories, illness and the like, but I do plan to finish the story. Chapter 18 is up on my deviantart page (my home base for now, neglected2much.deviantart.com).more...
What happened?
Have just read the whole series through thinking ch17 would be the climax.... and it isn't! You've been away a while, hopefully you can pick up again. An interesting story a bit different from the run of the mill stuff on here. Be good to see it through to the endmore...
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