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Arachnophobia, Emotional Attachment, Monophobia, Sensitive, Vindictive
- COMMENTS
Weezyfalmost 3 years agoVery annoying this Julia. He ate her out like 5 times without her returning the favor in anyway. Her pussy is not as good as Eve also.. whats her damned worth? Also this mc cries like 3/4 times per hour.. im at page 4 of this ch and its really annoying
nerserkerabout 4 years agoThe premise is good. A guy who made a contract with a demon without selling his soul. My only problem is Energy Harvesting. The guys know demons need energy, no souls as popular belief. Soul have a lot of energy, hence why demons collect them. And here lies my problem. He made a contract to collect energy, not only souls. Energy Harvesting allows him to absorb any type of energy and transform it into mana, even the negative energy like the seven sins. But we never see him do this. He just harvests souls for mana, which is a waste of his ability when he can gain energy from so many other things.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThis is the only story I've ever written comments for. It is that well written. I do not have money for patreon because I am poor but I will continue to follow the story from here. Keep up the great work.
~HaremLover
PureEvil88over 6 years agoAuthorI decided to do what scorge30 mentioned and start a Patreon. I will continue to post the chapters on here as well, but the chapters released on Patreon will be a bit different. The stories will contain the same content, but the rpg elements have been enhanced. To see what I mean I've offered the alternate version of Chapter 1 for free on my Patreon page. If you are interested please visit the link at the bottom of this comment. I won't be delaying the release of chapters here on Literotica. I will post the new chapter on Patreon at the same time I send the chapter into review on Literotica so there will probably be around a 2 day difference in release dates. I hope that you will all continue to support me either here on Literotica or on Patreon. So long as people are enjoying my stories I'm happy.
https://www.patreon.com/PureEvil
PhysicallyImpossibleover 6 years agoAs for character development, seems good so far, if maybe a bit condensed. Character motivations are clear enough (except for, maybe, Eve) if not a bit one-dimensional, nothing that can't be improved though. Overall, pretty good story with plenty of potential for growth and improvement. Hopefully chapter three comes out soon.
