The Debt

First of all, how could a man, husband bet that much and then let the goons use her. Stupid, stupid, stupid. Something tells me Rick is going to get bored, and then the wife still won't want the husband. How could some other man tell a wife not to fuck her husband-really. Where's the fucking shotgun? I would blow him to pieces and go to jail just so she would never get him again.

He's an idiot, and the moment she agreed to stay over, it was clear their relationship was spiraling into the ground.

Completely unoriginal story line: minus two stars

Uninspired character development (characters are two dimensional and straight from Central Casting) : minus two stars

As stroke story: uninspired (reads like all the others): minus one star

The score sheet says zero, but that's not permitted, so one star is all it can get

Really well written and thought out. Your hard work really shows, you crafted a really hot tale based on an old concept. I really like where you are taking this and look forward to any future installments! Keep up the good work!

the fact that a man allows himself to be blackmailed into something like this is unreal. The fact the wife went along with it is even worse and then allows the other man to treat her as such and do shit like that is unreal.