tagMind ControlThe Designer Ch. 09

The Designer Ch. 09


Author's Note: This is a continuation of a longer story, to understand all the relationships it's best to read from the beginning.

Thank you again for all your comments and votes. I value your feedback. A big thank you to sportychica334 for her editing and encouragement. Any additional errors are completely mine.

This is a work of fiction, all characters are above the age of 18.



"Dick. in. me. now." Carmen hissed.

Somehow we made it to our room before that happened.

Carmen spent the ride up the elevator unbuttoning my pants, and had her hand inside my boxers before I was able to persuade her to wait until we were behind closed doors. She intensified my building lust with a deep kiss, spearing her tongue back against my tonsils.

"What happened?" I asked breathlessly.

"Bitches," Carmen sighed, her pet word for Kelly and Lexi, "spent the last two hours fucking in the back seat."

"Really?" I asked as the elevator door opened and we walked into the top floor hallway.

"I had to watch in the rearview," Carmen explained, "then it was too much to watch, then the moans, and ... Just, please Jeremiah. I need..."

I understood what she needed. I used the keycard to unlock the door and she rushed past me, pulling her top off and pushing down her jeans. She turned towards me in a black bra and panties as I closed the door behind me. She was as stunning as I remembered her, black hair curled along the top of her breasts. She pulled her bra off releasing her heavy breasts with a delicious bounce. Her rigid nipples were apparent as she bent down and pushed her panties down. She pulled her feet clear and flopped on the bed, her fingers sliding up and down her moist sex.

I walked to the bed, watching her play with herself. Her eyes locked on mine as I pushed down my jeans, then pulled off my top. Her eyes were wide with need. I smiled and took my time pushing down my boxers, enjoying her needy sexy body.

"What did you say you needed?" I chided, as I held my growing erection.

"Your cock!" she spat, and sat up then crawled to the edge of the bed.

She grabbed my shaft and slid her mouth over my knob. Her lust filled eyes looking up to mine as she sucked my length into her mouth, her lips pressing into my pubic hair. She exhaled through her nose with a puff, then started to mouth fuck me. I closed my eyes and grabbed a fist full of her ebony hair enjoying her oral talents. I pulled her head back, and my cock popped out of her mouth and bounced before her face.

"And where did you need it?" I teased.

"In my cunt!" she panted and turned around and lifted her ass up to me, looking back over her shoulder, "Now, please J. I need it now."

I stepped to the edge of the bed, and slid my cockhead up and down her dripping snatch wetting my head and finding the right spot. I pressed my hips forward and thrust my cock deep into her tight cunt. She growled as she felt me fill her, pressing her hips back into me, lowering her head to the coverlet. I felt her pussy grip my cock as I held myself buried in her sex.

Waiting until I felt her impatience simmer, I slowly pulled out, then began an even thrusting stroke. I accelerated quickly, as I sensed her need. I grabbed her hips and pulled her back into my forward thrusts. Her moans and keens exhibited her enjoyment, as I fucked her hard, deep and fast. She reached her hand back between her thighs and felt my shaft slide in and out of her needy twat. I felt her fingertips slide up and start to circle her clit, pressing into her pussy. I stood taller, adjusting the angle of my thrusts to press the tip of my cock along the top of her tunnel.

She moaned, "AHHHH FUCK, YESS... FUCK FUCK, CUMMMMM!" she exploded.

I pulled her back, embedding myself into her quivering tunnel. I felt her hot juices flow against my groin and drip down my balls. Her tremors milked my cock deliciously trying to coax me to pulse my load into her. I held myself past the first ripples, then started back with the same hard tempo.

"OH GOD. DON'T STOP, FUCK. YESSS!" Carmen ranted as I kept up my furious pace.

I spanked her ass as I pulled out. Slamming forward into her then spanked again on the next backstroke. Her moans increased, encouraging me to redden her dusky cheeks with my arduous slaps. Finally, I leaned forward, cupping her breasts and feeling her hard nipples against my palms. I lifted her up, squatting slightly to stay inside her as I pulled her onto her knees. Sawing in short strokes, I kissed her neck, my hands massaging her tits.

I pulled out and she turned towards me, her eyes almost in a panic. I pulled her towards me, and kissed her deeply, then pushed her onto her back. She smiled cattily as she spread her legs, pulling her knees back. I knelt on the bed, and scooted forward, notching my cock into her open slit. She closed her eyes as I slid all the way into her, lowering my mouth to one of her rigid nipples.

Carmen's hips were meeting my thrusts as I sucked and licked her nipples. She ran her fingers through my short cropped hair. Her moans were music to my ears. I lifted my head to find her dark eyes seeking mine. I locked onto her, as I felt my balls tighten.

"Look at me, Carmen." I moaned, "watch me, watch me as I cum."

"Fuck! YES... SHOOT INSIDE ME!" Carmen screamed as I slammed deep into her.

Our eyes widened as my body shook. I shiver of electricity pooled in the pit of my core. My hips flexed instinctively, then a bolt of lightning shot up my spine. My cock erupted inside of her, my body rocking as I kept my eyes locked on Carmen's dark brown irises. Carmen wrapped her legs around my thighs holding me tight. Finally her eyes rolled back, and I felt her pussy pulse and ripple as her back arched into the mattress. I loved watching her come.

We stayed like that for untold moments. When I regained movement, I lowered my mouth to her heaving breasts, suckling a hard nipple tenderly. Carmen's fingers massaged the back of my head as I nursed lovingly.

"Jeremiah," Carmen said softly, "I didn't realize how much I missed that."

I looked up at her, "I only left 5 days ago," I laughed.

Carmen laughed and I slid up her body, and kissed her tenderly. Enjoying our first after sex cuddle. Her body, moist with the exertion of our coupling, felt warm against my chest. Her breasts pillowed against my chest as we kissed slowly. We enjoyed the afterglow of our coupling until my shrinking cock slipped from her pussy. I rolled to her side, and she rolled to face me.

"Did you mess with that other girl?" Carmen joked, "What is her name?"

"Alyssa," I reminded, "and no, I didn't ... well, kinda... It's hard to explain."

"Jeremiah!" Carmen exclaimed, shoving me gently, "I thought you'd learned your lesson."

I got a bit defensive, and rolled off the bed. I walked to retrieve my boxers pulling them up my legs. Carmen watched me with her teasing smile, and I couldn't stay mad at her. I rubbed the top of my head, and looked down at her as I stretched.

"It was an experiment," I explained, "She knew I was doing it to her, and afterwards, she didn't want me to reverse what I'd done."

"After what?" Carmen asked.

"After we made love." I continued.

"Made love, or fucked her silly?" she teased.

"Is there a difference?" I joked, "Seriously, Alyssa and I are officially an item."

"What?!" Carmen exclaimed, "then why the fuck are you here with me?"

"Because you needed it?" I reminded.

"Ay caramba!?" She exclaimed, "are all males completely stupid?"

She slid to the edge of the bed and started sliding her panties back on. She quickly slid them up, and stood up holding her bra. She looked at me angrily as I looked at her confused.

"You don't get it, do you?" Carmen sighed, putting her bra on, and sliding the straps up her shoulders.

"We talked about it," I stammered, "I knew that you, Lexi, and Kelly, would need me."

"Bullshit," Carmen sputtered as she walked to the door and pulled on her jeans, "You just wanted to keep fucking up, typical male."

I shook my head. I admittedly never understood females, and Carmen's sudden anger made no sense to me. I pulled on my jeans and tee-shirt. Carmen pulled down her sweatshirt and looked at me.

"Let's go, loverboy." she ordered.

"Where?" I asked.

"To go talk to your girlfriend," she explained exasperated.

We went next door and knocked. We waited and no one answered. We knocked again. Finally, we had to go back downstairs and get another key from the front desk. Becky smiled knowingly, as she looked at Carmen's tousled hair. I'm sure we smelled of sex, as she gave us another key card.

"Glad you're enjoying your stay, Jeremiah." Becky flirted.

Carmen punched me hard in the side, then walked back to the elevator.

"What was that for?" I asked slumping against the side of the elevator.

"Jeremiah, I forbid you from messing with that poor clerk!" Carmen said furiously.

"I wasn't going to," I replied irritated.

"You've messed with every other girl you've come in contact with," Carmen spat.

"Except you," I said truthfully.

I hadn't even scanned her, since our reunion. She looked at me with her dark black eyes, and considered my words. Her eyes softened, but her mouth was still in a firm frown.

"And why is that?" she asked, "Because I like to fuck?!"

I sighed, "Or, maybe since I found out that I have this fucked up power, I don't want to fuck with anyone."

"Except your girlfriend," Carmen countered, exiting the elevator and storming down the hall.

"That's not the same thing!?" I said, as I chased her.

Carmen reached our second suite, swiped the key card and opened the door. I reached the door as she slipped inside, and followed her in and closed the door. Just in time.

"What the fuck is this!?!" Carmen shouted.

I looked past Carmen and saw Kelly, Lexi and Alyssa all naked. Their heads were all lifted from the daisy-chain of bodies to see who was yelling. None of them showed any shame and looked to be quite happy. Finally after a few moments of awkward silence, Alyssa rolled over and off the bed, and stood up walking over to Carmen.

"You must be Carmen," Alyssa said, "We didn't really get to meet downstairs."

Carmen was taken aback, looking up and down Alyssa's nude body. I spent a few seconds appreciating the view before walking around Carmen, and sliding my hand around Alyssa's hip. Lexi and Kelly simply rearranged themselves until they laid on their sides, opposite of each other, and started back licking each others pussies.

"Do you know what Jeremiah did to you?" Carmen asked, unsurely.

"Yes, and I told him not to change me back." Alyssa stated.

"What did he change?" Carmen asked.

So Alyssa explained everything to Carmen. She explained she self-identified as a lesbian. She said she had loved me as a friend for the last couple of years. She explained how she struggled to between her emotions and her sexuality until I had adjusted her. Then she said she was happy with the change. She turned and hugged me close, and kissed me on the cheek.

"Did you know that he was fucking me?" Carmen confessed, still wary of the unusual circumstances.

"Yeah, well, you made that pretty clear." Alyssa said, "I didn't think I could stop you, or him. To tell you the truth, I was curious if I would still enjoy lesbian sex. So it was a good experiment to try right off."

"And?" Carmen asked.

"Oh, I still love it," Alyssa admitted, "And those two? Wow, they are very considerate. Thank you."

"Thank me?" Carmen gaped, "For what?"

"Clearly they've had a good teacher." Alyssa complimented.

Carmen held her fingertips to her lips, shaking her head. Then she sat down on the chair in the room and held her head in her hands. She started to cry, a soft cry.

Alyssa kneeled in front of her, concern on her face, "Carmen what is wrong?"

"I don't know if I can handle this?" Carmen sobbed, "It's all so weird, strange, messed up, awesome. I have so many mixed feelings about what has happened."

Alyssa sat on her haunches, looking up at Carmen and nodding, listening to her spill her guts.

"Part of me loves the new open relationship I have with those two twits," Carmen started indicating Kelly and Lexi.

"We love you too, Carmen," Kelly and Lexi said, sitting on the edge looking at Carmen with concern in their eyes. Carmen's cries had distracted them from their explorations, and now they were clearly concerned for their friend.

Carmen smiled, but said, "But it's so unlike you two! I also want you to be who you are supposed to be. Even if that means we stop... It is so confusing."

"It is confusing," Alyssa nodded, "That is what is so great about Jeremiah's ability. He can help."

"I can?" I asked.

"Yes, lover, you can," Alyssa stated, "The problem is Carmen's morals are in conflict. Her open sexuality is in conflict with what she understands as a normal relationship. I think. She is protective of her friends, and wants what is best for them."

"We all do," I interrupted.

"We do," Alyssa started, "We want them to continue on with becoming Kelly and Lexi. That has to include a new understanding of who they are now, not solely who they were before you met Kelly on the stairs."

"I'm not sure I understand," Carmen confessed, "What can Jeremiah do?"

"Jeremiah, scan Carmen, tell us what you see," Alyssa said to me.

Carmen stiffened, her eyes wide with fear.

"Carmen relax," Alyssa soothed, "Jeremiah won't do anything to you, unless you allow him."

Carmen softened, and looked at me. I scanned her and saw where her graph was active, two parts sparking as her psyche struggled with two conflicting ideas. Remembering our experiments I roughly identified her conflict.

"You seem to hold a strong moral value for a committed relationship, but that is in conflict with your openness towards sex with both males and females," I offered.

Alyssa nodded, as Carmen looked at me quietly. I could see Carmen thoughtfully mull over my diagnosis. Her eyes lifted to the ceiling, and I scanned her again. The activity sparked in the same place but was centered lower along her wall.

"Tell me what you're thinking," I asked Carmen as the change in location was curious.

"I was remembering all the failed relationships I'd had," Carmen confessed, a tear falling down her cheek.

"Fascinating," I thought to myself. I realized the reflections into her past was affecting the part of the wall that were active as she recalled her history. I turned my attention to Kelly and Lexi, and scanned them for the first time since I had left. Their moral walls were changed, some parts different than what I remembered.

"Wow," I said aloud.

"What?" asked Alyssa.

"I think people's walls are changed slowly as they have different experiences. Like a bad experience might make a certain section stronger, or try to protect something," I theorized.

"That's what I suspected," Alyssa offered, rising and taking my hand. "You have the ability to fix the 'scars' of past events so people aren't stuck in their past."

"You mean, I'm stuck?" Carmen asked.

"Tell us what you were remembering," Alyssa asked, sitting on the arm of Carmen's chair, and running a hand up and down her back.

"I was thinking about how I could never keep a relationship going," Carmen started, "How I'd be in love with a guy, and have great sex. I'd believe that we were serious. Then I'd be crushed when the guy would leave. The same thing happened so many times, I just gave up on the ideal of a relationship that I had in my mind. I started seeking just sexual relationships."

Carmen started crying again. Alyssa let her cry, removing her hand from her back as Carmen confronted her emotions.

"But sex didn't help," Carmen wailed, "It felt good, but I couldn't stand to be with anyone. I'd kick out whoever I was with, then cry myself to sleep."

I watched as Carmen processed her past. I could sense her abnormally high wall in the relationship section started to lower as her emotions processed her reactions. She was correcting herself, just really slowly.

"I can help," I said softly, "I know what I can do to help. If Carmen gives me permission."

Carmen looked up at me, eyes brimming with painful tears. She looked at Kelly and Lexi, who were focused on her with concern in their eyes. Carmen smiled, then looked up at Alyssa. Finally she looked at me. A glimmer of hope, or trust, flashed behind her eyes, and she nodded.

"Okay Jeremiah," Carmen said forcing a smile, "what the fuck, go ahead."

I focused on the center of the section, as I reached for her hand. She grabbed my fingers, and I pushed. Directing my talent against the strong bulwark that she had built up as the perfect relationship. I lowered it down, watching her eyes, her body and her face. It was like a light was going on, shining behind her dark eyes. The smile that was forced relaxed into a grin as her inner turmoil quieted.

"Thank you," Carmen breathed, almost in awe. She then turned to Alyssa, "Thank you too, Alyssa."

Alyssa hugged Carmen to her bare breast, "Oh Carmen, you're welcome."

I released Carmen's hand, and took a step back and leaned against the wall. I slid to the floor deep in thought. I was processing what I was able to do, and was amazed, humbled, confused and drained. Alyssa released Carmen, and came to me, wrapping her arms around me. Carmen went to the bed, and hugged the two girls.

"It's going to be okay, Kelly," Carmen said, "We'll be okay, Lexi."

"We know that Carmen," the girls said in unison, "Jeremiah makes everything better."

I focused on Kelly and Lexi, as Alyssa embraced me. I focused my talent on correcting the mistake I made in creating a moral affront towards clothes. With that fixed, I turned to Alyssa and kissed her, pulling her into my lap. She giggled as she wrapped her arms around my neck, and nuzzled her nose against mine.

"I'm hungry," I said.

"For me?" Alyssa asked, wide eyed.

"Well yes," I admitted, "but that can wait, I think we should all go eat dinner first. Then we can come back for dessert."

"We'll get dressed," said Kelly and Lexi together.

"Fuck me," said Carmen, amazed at their willingness to put clothes on.

"Maybe I will," said Alyssa, "after dinner."

Carmen and I looked at each other and laughed. The three of us shared a short hug. Carmen excused herself to fix her make up. I opened up the adjoining door to our other suite, then left to let Alyssa dress for dinner. I went back to the other suite, and grabbed a bottle of water from the mini-bar. I sat in one of the armchairs in the small room outside the bedroom and collected my thoughts.

I had know idea how much Carmen had struggled with how she valued relationships. Her expressive sexuality masked her pain from unsuccessful relationships. She used sex as a coping mechanism, but any relief she felt was short lived. Alyssa realized this so much quicker than I had, even after I was able to scan her responses, I wasn't sure I'd be able to figure out what needed fixing.

I heard a soft knock from the opposite side of the adjoining door to the other suite.

"Come." I called, still musing over what had just happened.

"Jeremiah," Alyssa chided, "you have to unlock it."

I laughed to myself as I stood and walked to unlock the door. Alyssa greeted me with her brilliant smile and lovely blue eyes. She was back in her traveling clothes. She leaned into me and we shared a soft hug.

"That was amazing," Aly said softly her head on my shoulder.

"I know," I admitted, "I couldn't have done that without your help."

"You'd have figured it out eventually," Alyssa encouraged.

I shrugged, and slid through the adjoining door. I pulled our bags off the baggage cart, and brought them back to our room. I was puzzled regarding who exactly was going to sleep where, but I figured I'd claim the room I was originally in. I also knew I wanted Alyssa by my side. Alyssa slid beside me, and slipped her hand in the crook of my arm as we walked back to the girls' suite.

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