- Humor & Satire
- The Editor
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"Julie...you have to cum. I can't take...," I informed her in gasps. She didn't let me finish. She pulled my lips back to hers and drove her tongue between them. I was gone. I exploded into her. Everything I had left me and entered her. I felt her muscles tense, her pussy clamped down and a shudder echoed down her leg. She was moaning in my mouth as I emptied into her. I wasn't sure how we remained upright. She was shaking uncontrollably and my legs felt like rubber. I stayed with her as my orgasm waned and hugged her close as she came down from her own.
"That was much better than I expected," Julie confided, "you were right about all of it." I separated from her and gently helped her lower her leg.
"No. I think that was much better than the story," I replied, "quite incredible in fact. This was by far the best time I have ever had." I carefully stroked the side of her head after locating it in the darkness. My eyes were just starting to adjust to the low light.
"You didn't write about the mess," Julie giggled. I imagined what must be running down her leg. I do kind of skip the messy parts when writing. Well, it was an emergency so I improvised. I couldn't leave her dripping in a grocery store. I ran my hand from her knee to her groin. I wiped my soaked hand on my boxers and repeated the process until my hand came back dry.
"Bet I won't see that in the story," she laughed. When I stood up she kissed me softly on the lips. "I really kind of needed that, thank you." It sounded like this was going to be a one-shot deal. She made it sound final. Strangely, it did make sense.
"My pleasure," I replied in a masculine tone. I was hoping she could sense my smile. We straightened our clothes and put ourselves back together. I tried to hand her her panties, but she insisted I keep them. I put the trophy back in my pocket.
Opening the door nearly blinded us. We got a few surprised looks from some customers, but none of the employees seemed aware of our little dalliance. Julie smiled at me and blew me a kiss. She grabbed her cart and headed down aisle six. I was getting a bit re-aroused thinking of her without panties in her summer dress. I shook my head and headed to the checkout lane. I must have smelled like a sex since the cashier's nose kept twitching. I just smiled and paid for the groceries.
I changed the story as soon as I got home. The ex-gymnast became an ex-cheerleader. She was a bit older and a hell of a lot sexier.
Much more realistic and so very hot. I'm glad you left out the messy part.
-j
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 days agoThis really needs a part 2 with him writing a hot sex scene involving harnesses and upside down copulation on a rocky ledge overlooking the rim of an active volcano and just as they are getting to the climax there's a rumbling from the depths of the crater. He then gets the edited reply from Julie with an attachment taking him to a website for a holiday in Hawaii............ 😂😂 or something similar. What a wonderfully amusing story. Absolutely loved it. BardnotBard
Anonymous6 months agoScraping the bottom of your literary boat on the rocks and shoals of poor grammar certainly does detract from what otherwise is a pleasant story cruise, but those are small fry compared to repeated egregious misspellings (i.e. masterbate) or poor word choice (lose vs loose).
On the other hand, writers say that when you wind up with a different story than you intended when first putting pen to paper (or fingertips to keys), them you never had to story fixed in your mind at the outset. The fact that you wound up with an enjoyable tale at the end is a reflection of your ability to wing it - acceptable for a short story but whole unsuitable for longer work which demand structure to which the characters adhere and support, not hijack.
Anonymous10 months agoThe twists in this story were totally believable. In fact they brought all your stories up a notch with this one as a filter for the others. A very well done tale.
Bill S.
