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Click hereAdriana's body tensed. Her muscles contracted on the bills of the speculum. Her fingers curled into tight fists, the knuckles turning white. Her head turned to the side away from Mr. Adams. "God please..." her words came out on a choked breath. Tears of pain silently sliding down her cheek to the pillow.
He didn't have to see the tears to know they were there. He held her hand firmly, squeezing it now and then attempting to reassure her, knowing she didn't even realize he was there, for her. He knew. Right now, that was what mattered most to him.
- COMMENTS
magee113over 10 years agoAuthorI am happy to tell you all that The Elite Broker Chapter 4 is now in the submission process. I hope to see it post to the site by this time next weekend.
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magee113over 10 years agoAuthorChapter 4 is on its way, I promise. I've had a small glitch that has put a short delay on it's submission to Lit. I hope to have it wrapped up in the next couple of days and online by this time next week. So sorry for the hiccup. Hope everyone had a relaxing, long weekend! Smiles and hugs for all of you!
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magee113over 10 years agoAuthorHello Readers,
To those of you enjoying the story so far, chapter 3 has been submitted and should be available by the weekend - I hope.
I look forward to your continued reviews and votes!
Hope you are having a great week!
joodleover 10 years agoI am enjoying this story so far. It reminds me of one of my favorites I found a long time ago. This story is highly unrealistic, but its one of those that you can enjoy with the acceptance that it is fiction, and won't always seem logical. I was expecting quite a bit more from the chapter's description, but I am sure the next will have more action. I appreciate how Mr Adams is strongly attracted to her, and seems like he will be adopting her himself. Looking forward to it!
koinonia_92over 10 years agoAnother great chapter with exceptional build up and quality story telling. The development of this story is so good. I encourage you to find an editor to shore up a few minor grammatical and spelling errors, but otherwise... WOW!! I'm ready for the next chapter.
