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Click hereFive minutes later Jacques appeared followed by Rachel. Obviously I was the last person they thought they would see and when I walked up behind Rachel and called her name she nearly jumped out of her skin.
"Come to gloat, have you," she snarled after she'd recovered from her fright.
"No, no I just wondered if I could talk to you for a minute." Jacques had stood beside her and placed a protective arm around her shoulders. "Alone." I added.
"You've got one minute," Rachel said before turning to Jacques. "Organize the bags and a taxi please. And get it right this time."
I smiled on the inside. Pointing to the table I'd just left I led her to it. She waved the waitress away when she approached and then looked sternly at me.
"Well, what is it? I've got a plane to catch."
"I just wanted to say goodbye and... I'm sorry for the things I said in France."
"No, you're not." Rachel said brusquely.
"Actually I am. At the time I was very upset, but you know... the children and everything. I didn't ever want it to get that ugly."
"Well it did, and now you've won, so congratulations." She began to stand up.
"Come on Rachel. Can't we just let this go?"
"What do you want from me Jeffrey? Do you want me to say it's alright? You've left me on the rubbish heap but you're riding off into the sunset with your new little tart?" She shouted.
"You and I have very different definitions of a rubbish heap!" I replied getting to my feet as well.
We stared at each other for a moment as the security staff gathered discreetly nearby and other patrons swiveled in their chairs.
"Goodbye, Rachel," I said bitterly, and strode out through the lobby.
In the back of the taxi on the way back to the bar I reached into my pocket and pulled out an envelope. On the front it proudly stated it was supplied courtesy of Pepper's Gallery Hotel. Opening it up I pulled out a cheque made out for Rachel to pay her two and a half million dollars. I stared at it briefly before I began tearing it into tiny pieces and putting them back in the envelope. I'd tried, but her anger had buried my sympathy and beaten my sense of fair play.
As I walked to the table I could see that Charlie and Jackie were onto a second bottle of bubbles. Charlie saw me approach and jumped up to give me a drunken cuddle.
"You okay now?" She whispered into my ear.
"Yes."
"How did it go?"
"Not as well as I hoped but probably as well as I should have expected."
Charlie pushed back and held me at arm's length so she could look at my face.
"What's that mean?"
"Hmmm," I thought for a moment. "Let's just say that little bit of me that might have still had some feelings for my ex-wife died and maybe that's about the best closure I could hope for."
Charlie watched me warily.
"Where's my glass? We're celebrating aren't we?" I said smiling broadly.
The girls squealed loudly and filled the empty glass on the table.
"A toast," I held my glass up. "To the future."
Why can’t readers just enjoy an excellent story and then shut up. I find that the most critical people commenting are either anonymous of haven’t written one story. I loved it. An excellent read. Well done CharlieB4.
Overall , a well written piece with good character development. The protagonist was truly fleshed out as a flawed hero.
It was a good story but ultimately it was a disappointment. Too much time was spent on petty issues and not enough on consistent character interactions, most of those involving the MC and wife seemed incomplete lacking real vitriol yet also lacking any real attempt to meaningfully communicate. The whole side of her relationship to the Belgian conman was glossed over and very unsatisfactory. It would have been good to have seen the wife in a few years times after she'd spent all her money and the Belgian had run off with the 7 million.
The wife throughout this story was a coniving self centered money grubbing narcissist. There was no reason, especially considering the stories begining portrayal of her and their relationship, for the MC to be anything other than extremely hostile once her phone call proved the affair. In fact his wishy washy attitude post this just made him come across as a weak and confused character lacking coherence. That he would even think of giving someone that had conspired to turn his daughter's against him and steal as much as they could from him makes one wonder what guilt he's carrying, what did he do that we aren't privvy to. It doesn't make him look magnanimous or the good guy, exactly the opposite in fact.
Excellent story @CharlieB4, showed depth of characters and their true values, especially last page when hero tries to git 2.5 Million more, and ex is haughty enough to not even realize
@anon. He’s a suggestion. Reread your comment, then let’s have a conversation about ignorance and education…