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You might recognize this story as one I had up in the past, under the title Northwest Hunters. I took it down for revision and a brief flirtation with possible publication.
Books One and Two of Northwest Hunters, titled Joining the Circle and Finding Happiness are already posted.
Thank you for taking the time to read my story. Please take the time to rate and leave a comment if the spirit moves you.
Enjoy
xantu
- COMMENTS
ladyvengeanceover 9 years agoI've seriously read this series at least 5 times and even previously when it was "Northwest Hunters." I love how in depth and realistic it is.
I understand but do not agree with the criticisms against Bob and Donna. I like that they are not the "all-knowing, flawless" stereotypes of dominants. They are human, learning and growing. A D/s relationship is just that a relationship; it is not static, but a negotiation, a balance ;-)
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI cannot comment easily on this but you are writing well. You will have to wrap this up soon or I will have to leave. Bob and Donna are not freaks and are not seriously deranged in my opinion. I cannot believe that I could do this, but that does not make them wrong or sick, just very different. I am also painfully straight but I also try to accept others' choices. This, to me, seems to be another "different life style." They are not injuring anybody with their choices, but the trial is excruciating! If you write another that is this strange I will probably choose not to read it. I have read everything you have written (chronologically) to this point and I have marvelled at you writing skills, but this one may be my last. Lynn
Jorgy444almost 12 years agoYou consider leaving a trial that you must be at
on a rumor from a street person, give me a break?
And quit calling a grown woman sweet Junie, pretty girl.
Bob and Donna are freaks, and should be locked
up, they are not good for Junie at all. Bob is no master
and is just having his cake and eating it too.
That being said, love the story, great fiction!
Greatest story on this site, naw, but still good.
mel_pomeneover 12 years agoAn amazing, hot, well-told and very 'together' story, Xantu. My congratulations on yet another excellent piece of erotic fiction from one of the true masters of the genre.
This story never lost its pace over twelve long chapters - not an easy accomplishment. My sincere thanks, 5 *s, and I hope you will be working on something new for us shortly.
Happy New Year!
GimletEdgeover 12 years agoYou are a consummate story teller. I never saw this coming.
I had thought that the testimony parts of the story might be tedious, but you are spinning it all out quite quickly. I really enjoyed the fluke of having three chapters appear in one day. It heightened the intensity of the unfolding trial.
