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Her legs were a little weak from kneeling, so she only slowly put her weight on them. She grabbed the moist towels on her backpack, cleaning herself where she'd made a mess, and removed the camera from its hiding place, stopping the recording, and putting it away.
'Don't worry. Unlike you I don't take pleasure from this.' Rachel went him again, and closed up on him, as she put her panties on, making a point of sounding as cold as possible. 'You see, you blackmailed the wrong girl.'
'But I didn't blackma...' he suddenly realised it. 'No way. Emily?'
'Yes, Emily. I'm her roommate. Nice to meet you.'
Ray seemed completely lost for words now.
'Look, I... I never meant to... she was the one who...'
Rachel slapped him.
'Shut up. Here's what's going to happen. You are going to steer the fuck away from her. You will not speak to her, look at her, and if I evendreamof you doing something I will upload this video on to the internet and send the link to everyone at this school. And I can do it very effectively too, because you're not the only one who knows his way around a computer. Are we understood?'
He was about to respond, but she grabbed hold of his hair in a painful grip, making it clear that she didn't want to hear him. Ray nodded, looking completely shaken from the events of the last half hour.
Grabbing the rest of her things and putting her pants and shoes on, she put a pair of scissors next to his hand, before heading for the door.
'I'm sure you can take care of the restraints with that. Just about in time before anyone appears. I think. See you around, slut.'
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoProofread/edit and brush up on your grammar . . . found it a bit too dry and strained, but with some work it could be a great piece
DinaParker69over 9 years agoAuthorThank you for the comments, wolf9696 and RedArrowKuczynski. :)
This story is most definetly continuing, I have basically the major plot lines until the end done (so maybe, maybe, Emma and Rachel may yet find themselves in intimate quarters. Maybe ;) ), but any feedback on the writting and the story is greatly appreciated.
As for the Emma / Emily thing, I'm not a native English speaker. I assumed that Emma was a diminutive for Emily and for what I gather it can be used in that fashion. But to avoid confusion, I'll stick with Emma from now on.
RedArrowKuczynskiover 9 years agoIt's too bad Emma/Emily (which is it? You couldn't seem to make up your mind!) didn't get a phone call from Rachel, leading to Emma finding them and helping out, so that he got stuffed from both ends. Other than that, an excellent read!
